i love you,
and i know you love me too,
you are the coolest person i know,
so,
i am going to,
write a poem about you,
my life would not be the same,
without you, it would be so lame,
if you were not here,
my life would be so unclear,
without you there to heal me,
so you see,
i would be lost without you,
you are like the glue,
that holds me together,
i really don't know whether,
i would be alive today,
without you always there to say,
"don't do it",
or "he's just not worth it",
without you i don't think i would be here today,
to say,
i love you,
just for being you.
Author notes
please suggest anything you think would make it better. i'm totally open to idea's.
Vicky^_^
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Written January 30th, 2005
A contest entry
- Horribly Happy! by blackestrose.
300 points, ended February 9, 2005, 2 entries
Gold trophy winner
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It's perfect. I can't say anything that can describe how perfect it is
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hey great work, oh nad thinks for adding me to ur faves (p.s i was hells messenger)
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thanks,i didn't think it was that good. but i guess you'd know better than me.
VickY^_^ -
I luv the rhyming in the poem because i luv poems that rhyme.i also like the background.But lets get back to the real thing i like your poem because you got the point on why you love this person and why you need him in your life great job i'm bookmarking it!
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I really like this poem I wrot one similiar to it to my best friend Jessi and another to my other best friend Erin. I totally know what you mean, If it weren't for those two sometimes I probably wouldn't have made it through the night. Terrific poem.
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I like it it's awesome I know how that goes I'm so glad we actually have true friends like that otherwise we would be now were!
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thanks. i love that background. my aunt actually sent it to me, so i only saw it fitting to use it for the poem about her. and because she deserves an awesome background, cause she's "da bomb" hehe.
Vicky^_^ -
AAAAAAWWWWWW!!!! This was so sweet! Very nice. It was cute! I love the background! It's so pretty! I can't stop looking at it! *few moments later* oooo so pretty! lol. Anyway, wonderful work!
Always and Forever,
~Kendal -
Damn....i have friends like that...i love them to death..but i cant write something happy about them..i can only write apolgy poems for fucking up and tell them i love them...great job...keep it up!!!
~!KIM!~ -
Aww, this is adorable. At first I thought it'd be this really sappy love poem, but turns out to be an honest expression of a pure love. Very good!
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yeah, i have a little problem writing happy things. it's really hard for me, but i'm glad you at least liked it a little.
Vicky^_^ -
The way it's formatted makes it seem a little choppy, and some of the ryhmes seem kinda forced, like you had to search hard for them. Overall though its good
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oh, i took the old ending out cause it sounded weird. but thanks for your imput.
Vicky^_^ -
great poem. i actully like the ending the way it is. so i think you should keep it but hey this is only my opinion.
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it looks good to me! but i think your right about the last part it kinda through me off! but still great job, and thanks for entering!
tomie~
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