I sit hear at my desk
Thinking about you
And I ask myself
What should I do?
I could call you
But what would I say
You don’t know me,
Until we meet someday
I could write you
But the words aren’t there
Its bad enough
I’m falling into despair
I drum my fingers
And you’re still on my mind
I ask myself
Why can’t you be mine?
I saw you for the last day
And it broke my heart
Because you died
And we had to part
I could finally talk to you
But you couldn’t see
You just lay there
And it broke me
Your mother came up to me
She gave me a thing
I opened it…
And out came a ring
I read the note
“I know you”
“I wanted you”
“But I couldn’t have you”
The end of the note said:
“I’ll love you till I die”
The tears flow freely
As I fall down and cry
I put on the ring
As the tears refuse to end
I feel so alone
How will this ever mend?
As they close the casket
And I say my last good-bye
I whisper
“I’ll love, you till I die”
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Written January 29th, 2005
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I cant beleive that we did that!!! OMG we're completlt blond...well i am natrurally but u get it..lol...we can just blame this on jeff and is very confusing emails..right? lol...well i thank you for the comment...both of them, you rock and i cnat wait to right the other part of that poem it was really good...its not to emotional right??...stupid jeff and his comments making me think at 11:00 at night and making me hurt my self!!! *curse you ur watching me*...we'll just blame evrything on jeff its the easiest way! ok welll this is intresting because no one knows that the heck we're talking about and they probly think we're insane! lol kk tootles
~jackie
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HOLYCRAP!!!! I am so0o0o0o0o freakin sorry!!! LMAO!! hehe! OMG!!! Okay just so that everyone knows... that comment up there by Mystic Eyes was really from me... i accidently did it on her thingy cuz she is sitting next to me and i forgot that we wern't on mine anymore... hmm... okay im confused.. but just so everyone knows!!! IT WAS ME WHO SAID THAT NOT HER!! lol im sorry jackie... hehe
jess
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gimme back my monkey!! you can have this other one
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So sad... but awesome!
AWW!!! That was so sad!! I will never let you see me cry!! Muah ha ha!! So don't look at me... yes i know you are sitting next to me... no i don't want your soup... yes you did just break my computer table... no your not sorry... okay then i wil let you go so that i can talk to you.. yes that makes sense... lol Great job on this poem!! I really liked it alot! keep up the good writing frank!! yes i called you Frank... got a problem???
jess
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I loved this poem. It brought tears to my eyes. I can't wait to read more of your work! Keep it up -
oh my gosh.. wow that bout made me cry. thats one of the best poems ive read. woahh your really talented. keep it up.. awesome
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well done!
This poem is really sweet. Love transending death is always a good theme to go with. And i always love a poem with a good rhyme scheme. I feel it gives it a nice flow.
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