You know, I always wanted to sit down and write you a love song.
But every time I get the feeling right.
I get the words all wrong.
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But I know how to make love laugh.
And you taught me how to make love cry.
And still, I’m a captive of your photograph.
The memories still get me high.
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A love song melody may haunt your mind.
If the lyrics seem just fair.
Though the message of love, may be hidden well.
Listen closely and its there.
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Perhaps my words are madness.
But do you understand?
It was written to tell of a sadness.
Of a dream that I had.
Of the touch of your hand.
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But now I know how to make love laugh.
And you taught me how to make love cry.
Though I’m still a captive of your photograph.
The memories still get me high.
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I can make love laugh babe.
You just make it cry.
I just a prisoner of your photograph.
And your smile still makes me try.
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RAM
Author notes
All my new old friends at all poetry
Can we take a vote from the mainstream?
Which songwriter so beautifully penned "Love Song"?
I beseech of you to share with me your feelings.
Namaste blessed Be.
God bless all in your heartstrings of love and eternal peace!
1. Justin Hayward of the Moody Blues
2. Paul McCartney of the Beatles
Written July 25th, 1986
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What did you think
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LooooveLLLLLLYYYY!!!!!
This is truly beautiful!!!
How I long for yesterdays
The feelings more complete
I draw a picture perfect poem
Though without you near I weep
Your heartbeats my melody
I breathe life from you
And I hope you do love me
For without you I'd be through
A kiss upon my lips dear love
Will keep me satisfied
But baby I need you thinking of
A life you living by my side
A million deaths, yet I return
To the one that I love most my dear
And you can feel my heart that burns
Forever and a year sincere
This piece of the puzzle I pen within
And I sing the songs so tenderly true
As our spirits intertwine where love begins
Just know I'll never stop loving you
Timothy The Poetic Weaver~
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Great write,i can really relate to this,being in love is great i'm told (lol)..and i hope you write more,wonderful all around.. -
If this was pesonal I bet the how you really feel would come into play to make this fantasic poem even better. Keep up the good work.
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wonderfully magical! is there anything you can't write about??
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awww
i like it alot
good job
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beautiful
omg i loved it everyword and every verse so awesome. something that when i read i could relate to. this was great i enjoyed reading it -
awesome write
tis wonderful, i erally felt the emotion in it. dont wanna tell you again to keep going but looks like i just did. -
Great poem, because almost all can relate. (except those lucky people that marry their first partner and never divorce) Nice rhythm and great rhyme. Never stop writing.
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i loved it more than words can say You have a beautiful talent PLEASE KEEP ON WRITING
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this is awesome. i love how it rhymes so well, the words just flow together. i think love poems are just about my favorite kind, they're fun to write, too. keep up the good work!
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Wow i luv this poem it's really good you've got loads of applaudes aswell. i really like these lines of your poem:
"I can make love laugh babe.
You just make it cry." Keep on writing.
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Wow i luv this poem it's really good you've got loads of applaudes aswell. i really like these lines of your poem:
"I can make love laugh babe.
You just make it cry." Keep pn writing.
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Wow. I am still stunned by the beauty of the words, and for me to hear the music, i think I might have cried. Wonderfully done. I am proud of your vulnerability and honesty.
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awesome
beautiful ... i like your love song ... I wish i music to go along with the lyrics that are so flowing and descript ... awesome job -
nostalgic
I never read this one. How asbsolutely beautiful.It's amazing to me that you still carry the torch and I pray that someday your memory will come true in the flesh.I love you.Linda
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this is really cool. i liked it. good job and thnx for sharing.
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Awww, beautiful emotion! I adore the flow you have. I just absoloutley LOVE it!
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A lovely and sad write, it hurts for a long time after, lovely visuals and very vivid, The flow is great and the use of words good, it was a great pleasure to read even if it left me feeling a little sad, all the best, and all the happiness possible. great read
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marvelous
ok so you just acomplished to still my heart right now . this was just beautiful and amazing u are a really good writer and the flow was so soothing and mellow it was really great. normally we give love btu all we get is sadness only when we give love and recieve it is when true love happens just keep your eyes open cuz u never know when it comes to you and u just let it past you. . .
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I have to agree this rock. I escpecailly liked the idea about making love laugh. And the memories, sometimes still they get you high. Well done really brilliant
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Wish we could hear music on this site. This would be a great song on the radio. The picture suits the poem very wll, they are both beautiful
This poem is like a sunny winter's afternoon, the dust streams playing in the brittle cold sunlight, and everything seems pale and washed out, like the false hopes the sun generates, light without heat, life without love.
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Beautiful emotion flowing like a river with even beautiful words. Great poetry. Keep it up
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Beautiful!
This is so beautiful!It remunds me of my first love lost!OOOOOUCH!I think this would truely be a good love song!You display a very good talent for this kind of thing! -
I thought this was very beautiful. So beautiful that I felt the need to comment. You have done a wonderful job here... just beautiful words and feeling. I enjoyed this piece.
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Wow...I loved the flow and the words you used in this piece. You are a very talented writer. Well done on this.
Keep writing
Countrybabe
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Let me dwell into your thoughts of music
Let me share you the hymn of love
And embrace you into the never-ending rhythm
Of your lovely masterpiece
I love to whistle it on a tune
Surely, I enjoyed your works of wisdom and emotion...
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wonderfully written
This is wonderfully expressed and well written. I can truly relate to someone making love cry. Good luck in the contest. Hugs~ Cuddles -
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Great job man this was a treat for my eyes to read. Keep up the outstanding work! -
Simple and amazing. I find that even the most simplistic thoughts..such as writing a song, though they can seem challenging, but if they pour out from your heart they're the easiest thing you've ever had to write about.
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wow...i loved the wording..its so elegant i think might be the word i'm looking for? then again i don't know i'm half asleep...i just know i enjoyed the read and i hope that i find the time when i'm more awake to read more of your work...ok yeah enough rambling...this was good.
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wonderful
Wow this was so sweet, I wish someone would write a love song about me. My favourite part was:
I can make love laugh babe.
You just make it cry.
I just a prisoner of your photograph.
And your smile still makes me try.
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beautiful write...i saw the title..and sadly i judged it by its somewhat cliche name..but this was so amazing...very great poem...i will comment again when i find the words
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Wow, this is a great poem and thank you for entering it into my contest! I really liked the emotion you showed, this seems like it could be a really good song, I loved the lines about making love laugh and making love cry, fantastically well-written! Loved it, well done and good luck!
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Wow...I am in love and I will talk
with you the all day and night
And whisper the sweets your ears should hear.
Smile.
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Oh suicidalzombie la la la !
Today I can deeply relate to your name
Oh my where do you go
When the one you wish was here
He swims in a fish bowl somewhere
I feel like Pink Floyds Song
Comfortably Numb
Hello is there anybody in there
And the lunatic in the grass
Thanks, ellie at least you can hold Jon
In my case, it is just an invisible romance
This is not how I am
I am not numb I feel
And he is far away in yonder fields
You can say it will be okay one day
And I will say their ain't no cure today
Could this be the last song we sing
When I see lips move and I cant, hear a thing
When I see words of love so divine on a page
And there is nobody to share this love today
What do I say?
I have never been one to succumb to being numb
There is a time and a place when numb should run
Being jaded is one thing but being so removed from all of life
Oh maybe love such as this is found in the afterlife
Namaste Blessed BE... All the best to you and yours
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wow, that was great!! loved it. I know how that feels, when I'm around Jon I just suddenly forget everything, I seem stupid and lose all common sense. I don't mind though cause he knows how I really am. Good job!!!
ellie
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rock faerie I awake and feel his lily breath near me
It is a dream in which we both breathe deep
It took a thousand smiles and a million miles
To return to this place of love above the time trials
Love song makes me sing in thru his green springs
And he know that life can change like the seasons
And to love and be in love do we really need a reason
Love is everything we see from the bumblebee
To the dolphins in the deep blue sea
As time goes by the orchestra continues playing
And I wonder does he listen to the words I’m saying
I feel your every heartbeat
Thank the heavens you're hear with me
All my life I need to give
For it is in my gifts that I must life
Where is the freedom we've inscribed?
For all these wondrous years
Once upon a time, I was just a schoolgirl
And he found me in fields of vast green
And he dreamed with me of love
And the happiness true love brings
He showed me the way
Flying higher on our trysail of yesterday
Love is our only need
Come along sing with us as a rose in spring
Sing to me rock faerie of all your dreams
You realize when you sing you bring your dreams closer to be
Without your love, this piece would have no meaning
As I sing to you, your love is appreciated
It means so much to leave a kind word
In the day in the night, sing upwards
Namaste Blessed Be.
All the best to you and yours forevermore!
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a song that's written from the bottom of your heart
of love that's within your mind and your soul
even if words are of madness and sounded really bad
but when you speak of love there's nothing wrong with that
i love your every words they make me sing
my heartbeats with your every thoughts
like an orchestra with their masterpiece
playing with the big crowds listening
i love this piece much.. appreciated..
keep it up.. and i have always love your works..
love
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Sharron, my sweet Sharron, I ache for you so,
To get such sweet poems from someone you know
It's quiite a dilema, you find yourself in,
Which one could it be, it makes your head spin,
But this I do know, as the stars are aglow,
That one or two love you, Although you don't know
which one is which, that son of a bitch
I wish for so, his colors he would show
But never mind the anguish, we'll flush him out one day
And when we find the true one, what will he have to say
It took a dunce from Pittsburgh,who wears some funky boots
To find the skunk, who made you smile, and gave you a few hoots
Yes, Sharron dear, the time is near, we nearly have him pegged,
I wish for you some respite, and hump him on his leg!
He'll come for you cross skies of blue and wisk you to your dream
On his seven inch steed you'll fly away, you'll have no other need,
to ponder night and day about the one who loves you so,
But if I ever meet him, I will surely let him know
He made you cry, he made you smile, he kept your spirits high,
Then I'll punch him in the stomach, and He'll never wonder why!
You are my friend, forever, he can take you anywhere,
But please remeber to send me a ticket,and join you at the fair!
I love you so.This you know. I've got to go, my head hurts so. Nitey nite!!!!!
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Amen in the hymns of Heaven
Oh, my sweet lord I never thought there could be two
Sometimes I feel l am in the twilight zone alone blue
Or the light zone with both of them near me
Both of them dear to me yes I will play my part
Of the femme fatale touching is believing
Soft is the light I see in both their eyes
Soft is this loving heart which smiles in tears
And I want to see who is he
Whom is he that has me trembling?
Softly dance with me
Gently tell me that you posses me
Unwind this dream in your mine
Open your heart close your eyes
Dream of us on fire in loving desire
Oh only he sets me free
To be loved as this
Is as sweet as a fist born flower to spring
He touches me I am dancing enchanted
By the music I see and hear in his eyes
This is a divine romance from the shores of heaven
Once again, I reach out to you in one love song
Of cerise beauty and divine truth.
I shall end by singing to you
Forever I shall love you
Think of me when you feel lonely
Dream of me within your dreams
I dare to share your every touch
I dare to care I sing I love you
I’m not afraid the starlight shines our way
If only if only I could touch you in the summer rain
As we both linger in the starlight hearing the music in the rain
Pouring down upon our windowpane
Looking at the skies, I see your eyes far across the sea
Somewhere this knight of hearts waits for me on his steed
I try to find him in the seas of life and nowhere is he
Nowhere can I see him yet his voice is all around me
I hear him singing to the moon and stars above
I feel him wrapping me in his wings of love
Oh I know this songs is penned with a loving heart
I have loved him from the very start
On with the story two have two in love with thee
Is above my wildest dreams hmmm two
Ummmm Hmmmm I know he cares I know he feels and loves me
Where is the miracle when he takes my hand and says I’m your man
Would you dance with me hand in hand? I’ve dreamed with you from afar
Tonight my darling we shall dance under the light of the stars
You know were flying high as we touch the skies with only love in our eyes
I love you my sister soul Linda Rose who loves me true blue.
I wonder as I wonder I'm not blue I’m just singing I love you
Would I love to be his every desire as I sing he lights my eternal fire!
This is a love sent from the shores of heaven
Then again, I wonder why he stays so far away
Could he feel he is not worthy of me?
This is why I want to sing to my beloved
I love you so may your heart be filled with all the love I can send upon your white cliffs of Dover. How I long to speak to you how I long to touch you >
I am honoured to be your lady if only one day you would find me.
I would look in your eyes and sing to you the moon and stars rise in your eyes.
Let us light a candle lover to find the palace of peace and love for the betterment of all humanity. As I sing a prayer in my native tongue Hebrew. HaTikvah ("The Hope") Israel's National Anthem
"As long as the Jewish spirit is yearning deep in the heart,
With eyes turned toward the East, looking toward Zion,
Then our hope - the two-thousand-year-old hope - will not be lost:
To be a free people in our land,
The land of Zion and Jerusalem."
Namaste Blessed be my sweet sister soul Linda Rose
May your blue skies bloom and grow in your rose heart aglow.
Just know how I feel and my heart loves you so.
Your love is rare and sacred as the most precious gem
Only angels sing as you who spread her wings in Heaven!
Your love is known by a million angels strong
Who trumpet on an on in your love songs
Only angels sing as you who spread her wings in Heaven!
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Paul, Justin,Paul, Justin
What does it matter..to be oh so loved
is the heart of the chatter
Your beuatiful soul is loved by both
Knowing this should be enough, that
somewhere, far acroos the sea, are two,
not one, who are in love with thee.
The song is penned with a loving heart,
don't worry who wrote it, just play the part
of the femme fatale, who is tearing both of their hearts apart.
been doing it for years, through smiles and tears,
someone does loves you, someone does care, one or the other
you are one lucky girl!Beautiful background and the picture on top is spectacular. Namaste Blessed be, My sweet sister, Sharron Corr, I love you so and weep with you, for a heart as true, should never be blue. Great collab! -
okay i expected a corny cheesy love song, and in some aspects I got that, but when writing about love it's impossible to not be cheesy and cliched, but you did so very very well. good write
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Wonderful
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This is great. I'm lost for words, its beautiful, and well great...lol. If one word were to discribe it, it would be...WOW. -
Love is madness, trust me. I know how you feel, I know how love feels even though i am fourteen i have some idea because of the surroudings I have in my poetic getaway. Nice poem and picture, I decorate all of my poems as well. stay in touch comment my poems I promise to comment yours
-Holly Trueblues o'Donnell
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Beautiful poem, it was heartfelt, I could tell. Nice job spacing it out with the colons. That was wonderful. Great job.
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It's lovely, simple and bittersweet, and lovely!
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wow
this is great
i love it....wonderful translation of feelings...i mean just
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So very beautiful, so very truthful
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Interesting word choice. I really like these lyrics, they are really hard to write and have them turn out well ... so props to you!
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This is excellent! Beautiful! GREAT JOB!
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Very good! You're excellent, don't stop. The wording was perfect.
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You have great talent. I'm truly impressed. Keep writing.
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Wow, wow, wow. Beautiful work. Breathtaking.
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tramendous!
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Very good and very commercial ,have you thought of doing a demo, it might be worth it as this is very commercial,I would love to hear the music you have in mind for this piece,nice, very nice it is a lovely love song, try and do that demo. all the best
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Wow. That poem is amazing. Right now it's something that I can really relate to. Thanks for sharing.
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Angeleyes, I loved this piece...It is so true, when we love someone, sometimes the right words don't come...But they came for u in this write...kntryg
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Wow!!! this is brilliant. Such moving words that create a picture all of it's own. Footprints of love like photographs leave a lasting memory in our hearts . Excellent write well done. Take care,,,mal
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beautiful poem. showing luv can be hard, i've never really been able to master it, but you sure can. great write, so keep writing, and have a great day!!
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wow I feel the same way epressing true love for someone is so hard and even putting in a song, sometimes words are undescribeble how you actually feel about a certain person very good write i liked it alot
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istilhatememore Namaste Blessed Be!
I know he so loves. This is the reason why I am caught in the net.
And both you and I seem to be getting wet. You can see now why I love and adore him naturally. You can see how tenderly how romantic he dances with me.
And if you look at Justin My Oh My. Dance me to his beauty until the end of time. I have a song that just might touch your heart. I wrote this for Justin when I was in Hawaii and feeling fine. I will share my love with you and lift you higher. So, lets sing and dance in true romance.
Get those keyboards out and we shall dance about. Here my dear sweet sister soul this song of love is for you 2. May you feel our love touch you in your heartbeat and in the heavens above.
All my love to you and yours, forevermore. Fly with us in wings of Amour and Je’tadore.
DANCING DOWN THE NILE
Sailing on the golden river
Your love I‘m trying to find
A mirror of the past
Reflected, in your eyes
As the golden river
Rises and falls
Past the pyramids and ancient ghosts
Your name I call
CHORUS:
Now I‘ve found your love
I feel like a child
I want to dance, dance, dance
Down the river
The moon and the sun
We all begin to shine
Dancing, dancing
Dancing down the Nile
(dancing, dancing, dancing...)
(dancing, dancing, dancing...)
From the mountains to the valleys
I reached out for you
Gathering daises and fair willows
For a love so true
Thru the endless searching
Made me realize
I was always here
Within your eyes
CHORUS
Dancing on your silver sails
You‘ll take me above the rain
Lifting up tomorrows veil
To feel our joy again
CHORUS
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For you Sir Moody Blue only the best will do!
Set me free upon the sea of your dreams.
Set me free in your hearts desire,
We lift the veil on the heavens higher.
Dance me to the end of love,
Lift me up to the heavens above.
Set me free upon the sea,
Darling you're all I'll ever see.
Love me fly with me thru all of eternity,
Set our hearts free upon the sea.
Dance our love to the heavens above,
Lift us higher in our wings of love.
Dance us all the way to heaven above,
In one whisper of divine love.
You fill my hearts desire,
As our love ascends higher and higher.
Pour vous monsieur Moody Bleu seulement la meilleure volonté !
Placez-moi libre sur la mer de vos rêves.
Placez-moi libre à vos coeurs désire,
Nous soulèvent le voile sur les cieux plus hauts.
Dansez-moi à la fin de l'amour,
Soulevez-moi jusqu'aux cieux.
Ci-dessus, placez-moi libre sur la mer,
Chéri que vous êtes tous je verrai jamais.
Aimez-moi mouche avec moi par toute l'éternité,
Placez nos coeurs libres sur la mer.
Dansez notre amour aux cieux ci-dessus,
Soulevez-nous plus haut dans dès nos ailes de l'amour.
Dansez-nous tout le chemin vers le ciel ci-dessus,
Dans un chuchotement de l'amour divin.
Vous remplissez mes coeurs désirez,
Car notre amour monte plus haut et plus haut.
{Luke in French the words flame in true romance. The French in truth have more words to describe the feeling of love. This is the language one day I wish to dance deeply within.}
Forgive me if I’ve misspelled in French I’m guessing here!
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Maatkara Hello my sweet sister soul
You are the only one who gives me a direct and clear answer.
The only reason I’ve had a shred of doubt is that the name
‘Ram’ does belong to another. And others have said what if this is
Paul>? Moreover, I said I could not see this because why would ASCAP lead me astray. If anyone would know, who is who would it not be ASCAP? Yes, I agree with you a thousand kisses deep. This is Justin and I do love him heart and soul. When you are in these realms of love nobody desires to make a mistake. Moreover, in my minds eye the only one I can see is Justin as he dances me to the end of love. I’ve wondered have I gone insane. Why am I feeling all these feelings. What is happening to me? Never have I been in the presence of anyone who makes me feel this way. I’ve gone ‘Haywire’ in Justin’s love. Talk about a cosmic alarm clock to wake me up. He woke me up for sure. This love is far beyond Justin being a singer on the world stage. He and I connected in all the essential loving ways. In truth, I was completely intimated by him.
I thought here is a man who has everything. What could I possibly give him? Talk about feeling unworthy of his love. I was so young I barely knew my own name. Lol lol. So, now that I am a day older and just a little bit bolder I can say to Justin I love you in truth honour and beauty. Your love has a hold on me for eternity.
He knows I tell no lies. He knows I was brought to him and I never knew the reason why? However, I asked Justin what is the connection I have to you? You see my dear sweet Genelle it’s just like your contest Miracles, Signs, Wonders… We met through his personal driver and I arrive with a three-volume set of “ The Course in Miracles” and a case of Ginseng RUSH. And leave my name and address in the books of love. It must have left an impression on Justin for sure. I just let the winds of life blow him my way. I knew I had a deep connection to Justin but at that time I did not know what? Looking back now I can laugh in the aftermath. If this is naught a Miracle, Sign, and Wonder, I don’t know what is? Namaste Blessed Be for reassuring this love of us.
Yes this is exactly what ASCAP said this is the style of Justin Hayward and why would anyone else Penn in his style. If I somewhat pen like Justin its just that his letters and words of love have so saturated my mind that this is the way the words flow out of me. Lol lol lol. And in truth the only thing that Justin ever desired just like all of us is true love. His true gems are his loving friends. Genelle I would play this play all over again. Talk about a wild ride as I sing with true love in my heart soul and eyes. We shall live on in Love Song. This is our song. This is the timeless place where we belong in one heartbeat of Love Song.
Thank you once again for thinking about our love and us. You always slice the pie so divine for all of us thank you for dancing me to the end of love. All the best to you and yours forevermore.
I love you Love & Light Sharron I think I will change my motto
2 “less is more”. Lol lol lol !
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Namaste Blessed Be Poetscolumn
@--->-- The perfect Love Song --<---@
Is in your arms where I belong
This is the perfect Love Song.
I’m laughing now as I dance on and on in Love Song!
Every time I read a song from you, I think of Justin.
I wonder why? I only pick up Justin and his love.
I recall I thought I must be dreaming
This must be what I most desire in my dreams.
I never thought that make-believe and dreams could be one
As we make love in the power of the sun.
Every time I read any Love Song, I think of Justin.
As we dance on and on in one Love Song!
Its not that I cannot see anyone else
This is for your eyes only
I love you in one RUSH of Love
Heaven sent from up above.
Radar Love
Rush of Love
Rush of love I love you
Do I need a reason to love you?
I just do
Rush of love I love you
As I drift with your heart forevermore
Way north in the Pegasus constellation
You and I dream as one sensation
We speed as three bright stars to the sun
Where our love forever is one one one
I see the three-winged horse
I chart my future course
I can be your fantasy
I can be your dream
If you take a chance dance with me
Ooooooooooooooooo
You sing and I believe
I’m all you'll ever see
You found yourself
In merlins magic wells
Somehow, love cast a spell
Feelings deep in our hearts forever dwell
We build a dream to treasure
Just you and I
As we touch the sky
Deep in your eyes
The smile on your face
When I dream in your grace
I say how about you and I
Take the time to shine in one port wine
Slowly I sip your wine
Caressing your skin as a violin
Tasting your cream and honey
Deep fuel in your golden crown of mythology
Beloved you and I are meant to be
My love just let me in naturally
In our warm nights deep within
Kissing your silken skin as a burning violin
I found I love you deep within
I’ve searched the seven seas
To find a love this complete
I seek to love you in truth and beauty
1/29/05 7:49:08 PM
{Hmm talk about you waking me up}
Cosmic Alarm Clock
He a rush of love
Sent from up above
I can never described this feeling
I just want to be one with you forever dreaming
For this love is the miracle of love divine
I fell in love the moment I tasted the wine in your eyes
I fell so fast I did not even know my name
I did not know what hit me from the silence
Even when I knew, I held you deep in trance
I look up and you’re standing by my side
Forever I shall love you in the light
My knight of white satin drifting in twilight
I’m your cherry delight in your white satin nights.
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ArianStasir This song was sent to me with many others. I searched for the author of the songs. I wrote this loving man back for years. The songs were taken to ASCAP. They said your songwriter friend is Justin Hayward of the Moody Blues. This really is collaboration. Would it be better to let the song sit where no one could see their exquisite beauty. True love is sharing. Moreover, we did write many letters to Threshold Records in London requesting permission to publish. In no way would I ever take anything away from Justin. He is my inspiration. Somehow, I am his inspiration. This has transpired all our lives. This is a gift of love. This is the true meaning of sharing our love.
Am I on the radio making money with his songs no no no. This is a gift for everyone to share. I can see why this would be confusing at first glance. Do you recall that old saying " You can't judge a book by its cover". When you read our entire story then you will understand. Therefore, I am only sharing the shores of our love. This is a heaven sent gift from up above. This is a gift of love. This is the perfect Love Song. Moreover, just to let you know the song came without a Title. I placed the name 'Love Song' for this exquisite song. I enjoy writing with Justin he dances me on and on.
When you read the love of us, you will see I am only here to share our love. This is not done out of greed. I have many songs of my own. This is the essence of our loving inspiration as one. When I met Justin its a feeling I cannot even describe. There are no words in any language to describe this feeling of timeless beauty!
The reason why this is a love that has existed through out time. Moreover, I was so young it was very difficult to understand my total connection to Justin. It is a feeling we share as one. la la la la la la la la la. Our love is the power of the sun.
Justin does not have a problem with me sharing this. If you notice the date on this song, it states 1986. I kept these songs in a dusty box for so long. Its time to share them with everyone. I waited until I had some type of go ahead. The artwork is my touch. The rest is Justin we share as one. This will always be us we share and love as one. As you can see, you don't really know who is who or do you? We have flair to inspire each other naturally. We dance and sing because we love each other.
Justin and I happened naturally both of us were surprised and overjoyed at the love we share in our hearts. I hope this somewhat explains our dharma. He is dancing me to the moon and stars above in his never-ending love. He is dancing me to the beginning of true love. This is my way to thank him for without his love I could not be what I am. I would simply not exist without him. Somehow, my soul knew that I knew him. Moreover, Justin being as aware and deep as anyone could be knew this feeling in-between us. And he danced me and unfolded our love.
This is a story that will go down in history as one of the greatest love stories ever told. Justin foretold this eons ago. He does fully understand and comprehend the road of his soul. Love flows thru him . And love brought me to his loving arms. Love is us! And I will dance with him to the end of love. There is no greater power than " The power of true love". Namaste Blessed Be. Love is worth searching for. I must tell you he can read my mind thru space and time. For this song is exactly what I was feeling the moment I met Justin. Our love has grown a hundred fold since we first met. Words seem to lose there meaning in the feeling of our love. He has shown me the true meaning of love and loving. I thank the Lord above for allowing us the chance to unfold our love. This is a wonderful world when you share your love. Therefore, this is all this songs about. Beyond a doubt to share, your love is better than to keep your love locked away. For when you depart this earthly body, what do you really take with you? You take the love in your heart and your memories. If you read on you will see this love has gone on and on thru time. We search for each other because we know in our hearts were one. If you've never actually had a past life memory this would not make any common sense to you. I recall Justin and at the same moment in time, he recalls me. So, the dance goes on on in Love Song. All the best to you and yours forevermore.
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A little confused to be reading someone else's work and not your own? :S
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@--->-- The perfect Love Song --<---@
I can understand how the words become all wrong
for when true love resides the mind subsides
it cannot handle the voice of the heart
for no words could ever create a perfect love song.
Give up on it love and let love not let you cry
for you cannot write the perfect love song.
This kind of song can only be felt and seen
it can only be touched in our heavens sky.
We could pen words of melody both day and night
as the rhythm of our hearts are in rialto
and our souls are entwined forever more
leaving the words we choose never seeming to be right.
Though imagine a love such as ours in time
watch it to see what you may see
notice the flow and smiles around
and how each little word is in perfect rhyme.
For we all have a photograph of our perfect love
as we gaze upon it all our days even in its presence
yet when in sight we never search for what to say
because the words are given to us from the heavens above.
My darling I must say in closure of this letter
you cannot write the perfect love song
for we have already been created
our love is beautiful as nothing more could ever be better. -
That is not McCartney's style at all. So, of course it is Justin! But you knew that already.
~G
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Truly touching
a mere whisper of love that leaves your mouth, touches me in the most powerful ways - i cannot comprehend it, but nor do I want to change it. This is a beautiful, peaceful, soft and loving song of hearts desire, trés bien.
Luke
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Perfect
I think in the mood that I am in right now this poem describes it perfecly. I am so glad I chanced upon this poem, I wanted to write something but could not find the right words maybe reading this will help me gather my thoughts. Thanx for sharing -
Excellent!
\Ofcourse I know the way you feel, but baby, what about the King, he sings a love song so beautiful, and how his voice sings tenderly\
-Elvis
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this is tragic and joyful- and it's making me cry. i can hardly see the keyboard through my tears. exquisite- thank you so much for sharing this.
blessed be -
thats really really good.. you are one talented person.. keep it up.. i enjoy reading your stuff.
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this is really good. I bet it will make a great song! It has some great emotion in it. Keep up the good writing!
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this is actually the 1st song i have read on here, but i really like what you have done to it. it actually makes sense to me. unlike some of the music they got going on today. but this sounds like something that would be good listening through alicia keys
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This was an excellent write! It described those feelings so well, in fact it describes some feelings I've been dealing with. Very very good job! God bless
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This is incredible: "But I know how to make love laugh.
And you taught me how to make love cry. And still, I’m a captive of your photograph. The memories still get me high."
"Perhaps my words are madness. But do you understand?
It was written to tell of a sadness. Of a dream that I had.
Of the touch of your hand."
Such wonderful words! Bravo!
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wow that was amazing, It really made me think
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This is realy beautiful, and it was just so beautiful to read. Really loved it, keep it up!
<3 Britt -
aww this was truely beautiful! i really understand the point you were tryin to get across! it was very romantic and i usually dont read lyrical poems! but this was truely worth it anyway keep up the good work love ya chelle
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ooh Very nice! I really like this one, it's really beautiful.
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wonderful
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excelent
THis write is so full of emotion happiness sadness it has it all. It is a well written peice -
Great
I really liked this...nice images & the wording was perfection!Keep it up!
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I enjoyed reading this piece...................
thanks for sharing it
Gothic Angel
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wow i really like that. awesome song. i loved the flow. and i love the backround it makes the song stick out. great job keep it up.
Please read one of my poems i would really appreciate it
LIVIN~DYIN~LAUGHIN~CRYIN~
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beautiful
i really like that! -
Lovely
What makes a love song...a declaration...a hope....and truth... plus an audience...I found all in this write ..beautifully penned
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Awesome song! I absolutely love it. It encompasses everything I feel love is. Great job!
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this is really beautiful I enjoied reading thatnk you so much for sharing this with all of us. Kelly Sue
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Very well written! Love songs should be the easiest songs to write as they are from teh heart and should be free-flowing and natural. But they never are!!
I especially enjoyed the ending,
I just a prisoner of your photograph.
And your smile still makes me try.
Denotes some resentment of being in love, although it does have the effect of making you want to be trapped in that love. All in all, a good write.
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THis is an AWESOME write. I love the words that you used, it also has a really nice flow to it. Great JOb, Keep it up!
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The words may have been wrong but the song was so right. One of the most romantic things I have read thus far at this site. Very good job. Keep on writing.
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Well, this was certainly a great write. I loved it. Write on. ~~SpydurPoet~~
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LipTheGan love is worth trying for
For these are the moments, we all love and adore
I cherish deeply what you said to Wandering Dreams
You look into others hearts and you see
You see deep and clearly
I also find these memories help me
Get through the hard times and I believe in our dreams
We live our lives for love
We live to breath in the shores of love and share with our beloved
As we look up and sing to the moon and stars above
Deep within all our love
We touch each other to find our hearts in our hand
LibTheGan I'm doing what I can
There is nothing i want more
Then to share his love
As I reach up and sing, i would die for you
I love you
I love you
I love you
Its true everything i do i do for you
Because i love you
Because i long to touch you
As i sing and dance in one flame of eternal truth.
I love you
I love you
I love you.
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I know how you feel, WanderingDreams - so did I. I find these memories help me get through it.
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