The lover of my timeless soul
Your angel eyes, see visions old
For deep inside, I cannot hide
As our dreams today unfold
This place called heaven, does exist
When I'm kissed, you grant each wish
Comforting me, through all my fears
When I cried, you caught the tears
My lover, my heart, beats for you
For as you write of golden, blue
A single, white rose, you do share
You're all I'll ever need my dear
Embrace me, touch love, as we give
Through dreams we share, both long to live
So two lovers, we'll always be
In the arms of eternity
Author notes
Thanks for reading me, much love to all! -Timothy
Written January 29th, 2005
In a list
A contest entry
- Write me Love Poems With These Titles by PurpleSky.
1000 points, ended February 8, 2005, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
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aawww love youuu
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This is so beautiful...I remember feeling this way, how i long to feel that again. This poem as touched me deep down, thank-you for making me feel again...
Cathryn
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masterly!
"Through dreams we share, both long to live
So two lovers, we'll always be
In the arms of eternity" such golden sentences come only from your pen! You write with the ink of love that is a match of colors golden yelloe,green and rosy red! thank you my sweet brother!
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beautiful, really. it's hard to capture the innocent, optimistic side of love without becoming clichee. great flow/rhythm too. good luck in the contest.
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Beautiful, just flowing in your words. So soft and gentle, very well done, I wish you all the best in the contest, reading your work has been a joy. Ann
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My lover, my heart, beats for you
For as you write of golden, blue
A single, white rose, you do share
You're all I'll ever need my dear
Embrace me, touch love, as we give
Through dreams we share, both long to live
So two lovers, we'll always be
In the arms of eternity
Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww those lines were perfect...like written from an angel of God...true words of wisdom to your love of your life. You express every word, every poem, every write you ever wrote with such passion and you pen to the last drop of perfection...you are the only person that I know that has reached this almost perfection in writing we all try to reach! Keep writing and I will keep reading...!!!
Amazing is all i can say!
~lyndz~ -
This amazing breath taking.. I know how you feels tis a beautfiul thing .. good job
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Very soothing love poem Timothy and indeed most beautiful
Reading this poem, to me, felt like you transcended time so to speak. Like I felt like I was an observer of a moment I may or may not of been meant to observe. One of those timeless moments that occur out of reality~~ like a dream.
This is a very beautiful piece of poetry my friend...me guesses you will have another trophy propped on your page for this one.
Lovely work Tim
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this was a great piece and really works for the title.. good ending too.. i really love your works.. mr.. as always.. there are really from the heart and expresses such passion and lots of love.. full of emotions.. good luck in the contest..
rock faerie -
Excellent Write\Very Lovely!
You know I love all your works, thanks for sharing you, and being you Cuz!
-blueangel4u
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Another beautiful poem, my friend!
<3 Maureen
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This was beautiful, not just in the poetic sense, but in the physical sense as well. YOu can really feel this poem, the airiness of it, the way it rolls of the tongue, and the way it envelopes you like a warm blanket. Excellent write as always.
~Carrie
(We need to talk).
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"So two lovers, we'll always be In the arms of eternity" That line is just amazing, I love this poem!!!!!!!
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Thank you for your never ending kisses of love
I need your love I cherish you
I linger in the loving songs you say and o
This is a song of two lovers in love
I embrace you with an open heart
My darling I’ve loved your from the very start
I could give you a the moon the stars above
And nothing in the heaves will match our love
I shall find a lovely image to post with the song
Something very charming that has the feel
Just the touch of us two as one in love
Its you I long to hold
I’ve heard this before so long ago
As you echo my heart on the wings of your soul
I love you keep me in this loving place
For we can fill the ocean with our grace.
Namaste Blessed Be my loving friend
The Dream Weaver help me please ‘
Help me if you can I need to mend
And I don’t care what has happened in the past
We’re both here now and love can bloom and last
The mould has been cast the dye in place
Yet, not one is there to caress the tenderness in your face.
I love you Sharon
But now i know how to make love laugh.
And you taught me how to make love cry.
Though I’m still a captive of your photograph.
The memories still get me high.
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{ between each set of verses lyrics }
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I can make love laugh babe.
You just make it cry.
I just a prisoner of your photograph.
And your smile still makes me try.
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This is gorgeous. I think I might send this to my g/f. I love the breathy tone of it...it's just so amazing. The descriptions you use are great.
~Erika~ -
This is really lovely, and really heartful but i thought that in some places the rhyme restricted what you were trying to say. "Embrace me, touch love, as we give
Through dreams we share, both long to live"
I thought those lines were particularly beautiful. A lovely poem
Pinkxxx
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