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Violet Eyes

Your eyes bewitching violet,
Your skin so fair and pale,
I can not take my eyes from you,
and when I try I fail.

I think about you day and night,
and in my dreams as well,
Will I ever have the nerve to tell you?
Only time will tell...

Author notes

It's a love poem for a fan fiction I wrote. From Harry Potter to Lavendar Brown whos eyes are, despite her name, violet.
Written January 29th, 2005

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  • gprcrower
    June 15, 2005
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    I love this. Probably my fav. I never want to think about a guy in yer pants again. Ugh!! NIGHTMARES!


  • SilentEmpySoul
    January 30, 2005
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    very nice little poem you have here! keep it up!

  • Hardy Parkerson
    January 29, 2005
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    Nice little poem!


  • Quilleh
    January 29, 2005
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    Nice

    Aww, this is cute, and I doubt, /seriously/ that Harry could write that well.
    One misuse I saw, in the first stanza.
    "Fare" should be spelt fair.
    Edited on Jan 29, 11:50 because 'Typo'.