the moon slides gallantly across the black
shining passionatly for him
and we
are children
of the night-
children
so fearful of the shadows
(the unknown dark)
but he wants his dark known
and he wants \the light of\ the moon to fade away
he likes it shadowless
(no light to cast shadows)
he likes to see clearly and unimaginably
he is in love
(with me
actually)
i am in love
with him
but we are so ignorant
that we don't even know (our deep love for eachother)
he's in the dark
he can't see anything
(those on a stage
cannot see those in the dark crowd,
not even the ones closest to them)
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Written January 29th, 2005
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hey thanks for catching that
thanks for the compliment too
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blind eyes,blind eyes...and mute voices with hearts so loud
so loud
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oh wow so awsome i can relate to this so well its an amazing piece im so glad you shared it your very talented also would like to point out 1 little boo boo lol you forgot the d in children of the fist time you used children but other than that peeeeerfect poem great write
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ooh this is really, REALLY good. It is so original, and I love the way you experimented with the layout on the page. I love the imagery of light and dark too. This was really impressive, thankyou for letting me read.
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right- from kla
Edited on Jan 29, 9:25 p.m. because ''.
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