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Jack

Thy hands be nimble,
May pain be quick,
As light flickers out
With the candle's wick.

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I might do a series of these... originating from Mother Goose
Written January 28th, 2005

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  • Sjr
    January 28, 2005
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    heeheehee, i love how you changed a nursery rhyme and turned it into this.its awesome. keep up the good work.