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Blair

My daughter
beautiful in all her own.
Only one month of age.
My sanity, my love
the only thing that keeps me going
the only thing I live for.
Admiration... runs deep.
Her smile makes me smile
her laugh makes me laugh
her cry makes me cry.
I love her.
Blair

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Written January 28th, 2005

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  • Rainbowchaser
    June 17, 2005
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    Oh this is truly beautiful, so touching and celebratory. I found this very touching, it will be a lovely thing to give to Blair when she is older. Great Job


  • Jaded Lily gold member
    June 8, 2005
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    I remember my first child...but then, I remember feeling like this with each of them. Excellent emotion here. This is so sweet and touching. Enjoy every precious moment with your darling Blair.

    Lily ~*


  • Auburn Sunrise gold member
    May 7, 2005
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    Awwww... how sweet and wonderful that you write a tribute to your baby girl! This was well written and very touching! Blair is a beautiful name by the way! Excellent job and good luck with Blair!


  • IrrefutableBliss
    February 24, 2005
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    Hey cat... nice job.


  • Despairkitty
    January 30, 2005
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    This was a beautiful tribute to your new daughter. I loved it.
    Despair


  • claudegagne
    January 28, 2005
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    Thank you for entering the contest
    1 month old! Congratulation! Happy mptherhood to ya
    Peace!
    Claude

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