when i look at the sky i can see you
and it brings a smile to my face
and i wish you were here with me
if only it could be
i sit there crying
wondering
why you don't want me.
if only you could see
the way you treat me
it was definitely not meant to be
now i see.
i should have thought this trough
i wish it could be two
but its me and not you.
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Written January 28th, 2005
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Another heartfelt poem that you should be proud of (although you might wanna correct some of the typos). AS the others have already said I hope that you are not in the same situation as the character in the poem. Take care.
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awwwwww sad man. Great poem though. May I sad a worm welcome to this retarted ohhhh sorry i mean amazing and spirtiualy uplifting commenity of poets!
only joking its a great place to comment, read, write explore, experiment and dont be intimadated its big i know but yourll get your head round it don't worry.
see ya round!
oooohhhhhh sooooooo Mighty RICH!!!
(btw yes I am your mate Rich rather than some random feek well that too
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hey this is a gr8 poem i jsut hope it isnt really happening to you like dani sed
i specially like this bit
i sit there crying
wondering
why you don't want me.
ive done it so many times but no more i hope
rae x x
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This is sweet Luke. I hope this isnt personal, cause nobody should treat anyone badly.
Gd write, keep it up.
Dani xx -
Sad.. thats the only way to put it.. I kno it hurts really bad when the one you love doesnt love you back.. it hurts more when they treat you like crap.. hope you get to feeling better!!
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Very sad. It hurts so much when you realize the one you love has no love for you. Great poem.
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