i hate you for making me hate myself
i hate you for making me bleed
i hate you for caring so little
i hate you for spilling your seed
i hate you for saying you cared so much
i hate you for being the only one i need
i hate you for being here with me so long
i hate you for leaving my side
i hate you for the way you touched me
i hate you for all the times you lied
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i chose hate
Written January 28th, 2005
A contest entry
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300 points, ended February 21, 2005, 8 entries
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hmmm... i don't know. i get the craziest impression that you really hate someone... don't know what made me think that. LoL... good work
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oooooow wow this is great
i like the way you repeated 'i hate' and the rhyming was good too thanks 4 entering 
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anger...i love anger...i have so much of it...but this is not about me...i truly loved this poem...im lost for words here because, yet again, you have left me speechless....great write, toodles
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it is ten things, isn't it? i didn't realize that when i wrote it. acually, i wuldn't say i wrote it so much as i came. kinda starnge- because i didn't like it at all. the anger was for my lover who decided to leave me for his ex wife. he'd just told me he loved me and he'd never leave my side. so, needless to point out- i was quite perturbed. thank you for your comment- i do appreciate it. just 1 question, though: how did you come across this poem? have i commented yet on any of yours?
blessed be -
Ten things I hate about you, huh? It could ba about so many things, from love gone wrong, to parent gone bad. Which, for it's universal appeal, makes it a keeper. So, why all the anger?
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I love it. the emotion is so well known. its great. i guess because i can relate. probably not in the exact way. I don;t really think it is hackeneyed just a small conformity but not bad at all. great job.
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