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everything

when it rains
in the darkness
of the cold
of the night
i can feel
i can see
better now
than i could.
when the sunlight
hits a face
when the shadows
steal it back
when the colors
of the feeling
of loniless
arise.
can you see it
can you know
what the emptiness
has held
while we danced
among foes
and stood rejected
among friends?
does the light
that brightens noon
continue
behind your eyes?
behind mine?
could you dare
to realize
the importance
of a lost moment?
do you know me?
or just my mask?
can you feel
or just imagine?
do you know?
or are just guessing
what may lie
behind the lie.
do you understand
or just pretend?
can you tell me
how you know?
how you feel?
i don't know.
i can't know.
you make up
for everything
i lack.
i lack
everything.
you are my
everything.

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Written January 2nd, 2005

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  • BeautyInMyTragedy
    January 28, 2005
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    I like it, i can relate to it really well. i love the way it rhymes and fits all together!