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Anal Dream

THIS POEM IS PART OF EDNA'S "randyhornbag" EROTICA COLLECTION



rip off my dripping panties
and part my waiting butt-cheeks
sniff my fresh-scrubbed anus
then rim me fucking senseless

taste the sweet-sour tang
of my recent defecation
force your horny mouth-prick
past my eager sphincter

seeking to engulf me
in my rectal cum-lust
and now for our delectation
shove your huge cock up me

and fill me with your hot spunk
or fist me till I scream
my fucking brains out and
then piss myself in terror

 

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Author notes

This was my first medal-winning poem here on AP, back in February 2005. For another medal-winner, go to allpoetry.com/poem/1040549 .



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Written January 28th, 2005

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  • I A Muse Myself
    March 6

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    Reading that left a funny taste in my mouth that I can't quite place... it's on the tip of my tongue... shit, lost it.


  • Raelin
    January 19, 2007
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    Truly a great write but I guess I don't need to tell you that. LOL Keep them coming and blessed be.


  • FisherCat
    January 1, 2007

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    WOW!!!

    My, my, my, you have really floored me with this write! Really not sure 'bout travelin the hershey highway, but a very good write none the less! Thanks for sharing. Congrats on the trophey!


  • j-ay rose
    August 3, 2006
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    Holy shit.


  • -I love my midget-
    June 23, 2006
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    I thought the suggestion that your breath smelled slightly worse than the odour that comes from your delicious sphincter was quite a funny quip!


  • -I love my midget-
    January 14, 2006
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    no need Edna, I could find your ass with the light off, unless of course your breath has improved. ;-)


  • Edna Sweetlove
    January 14, 2006
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    Did you like the diagram? It was put there several months ago for YOUR guidance, ducky, just in case you popped by.


  • Edna Sweetlove
    January 14, 2006
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    I had forgotten about Calpon. I prefer a good double dose of Piriton mixed with beta-blockers as that relaxes the sphincter and allows a HUGE lump of randy gristle up there without more than a million decibel scream or 2.
    Edited on Jan 14, 8:00 p.m. because ''.

  • -I love my midget-
    January 14, 2006
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    sorry, forgot the double handed fisting.


  • -I love my midget-
    January 14, 2006
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    the diagram just adds to the romance of the poem. next time I am struggling to convince my girlfriend to let me do her in the ass I shall set the mood with candles and Barry White and recite this to her, with your permission of course. And if that fails then I shall wait until she is asleep, calpol makes her sleepy.


  • Engelbert Humpalot
    November 29, 2005
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    This is one of the most vulgar things I have ever read in my entire life. I shall put you on my favourites lists if I have not already done that.


  • Dragonsong silver member
    October 19, 2005
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    OOooh.... interesting! A very brave write... on a usually taboo topic.... not often that one finds someone willing to share so openly


  • Confusicus
    October 19, 2005
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    For someone whos motto is "Sweet by name, sweet by nature". This was morally disgusting. I cant say anything about it, Im too young for a real opinion on it.


  • Camlek
    October 19, 2005
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    My my my this is a bovril plunger poem if ever there was one. Harsh, vulgar and just the way we like em! Keep em coming Sweetlove! xxx


  • Dark Prince
    April 3, 2005
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    you like your fucking hard and brutal. With a dash of sarcastic bite. A firey queen, no doubt, but what would I know I am a meer breeder.


  • Kelly Sue
    February 15, 2005
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    wow this is great I love it. you are a really talented writter. I really enjoied this I can't wait to read more of your poetry. Best wishes in all you do.
    ~~Kelly Sue~~


  • Edna Sweetlove
    February 15, 2005
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    in response to RainbowChaser - i've had more anal than most people have had hot breakfasts


  • Rose Irish Emily
    February 14, 2005
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    Experience with anal?


  • Edna Sweetlove
    February 8, 2005
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    thank you babyalah - let me get this straight - you read THIS poem together with your brother................... wow


  • babyalah
    February 7, 2005
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    wow! that was good. My bro sat here reading this to say his in love! he is a ass person lol well done and good luck


  • anonymousjunkie
    February 5, 2005
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    interesting....agressive and angry and...VERY lustful

    not an ass person haha, though am oftne told i am a pain in others' asses haha


  • Edna Sweetlove
    February 4, 2005
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    I'm from the planet Sodomy, where all the action is near Uranus...
    Edited on Mar 02, 1:34 p.m. because ''.


  • Soul-2-Soul
    February 4, 2005
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    hmmm...interesting indeed...very aggressive very powerful very hot where are you from again?? lol

    i am an ass man myself. great imagery...

  • catwomen
    February 4, 2005
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    mmmmmm a very erotic poem here, not my kind of poem im afraid but do keep on writing.

  • Edna Sweetlove
    February 4, 2005
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    cool and very kinky!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    We Sweetloves are famed for our vulgarity

    Edited on Mar 24, 8:25 because ''.


  • care bear love
    January 28, 2005
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    differnt

    WOW! Erotic indeed. A different kind of erotic. Good write and good description. Keep up the good work!
    Casey
    Blessed BE

  • DevinHart
    January 28, 2005
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    Not For Me

    Not my thing...but hey, live and live and however you like it! The structure of the writing was good however.

  • Edna Sweetlove
    January 28, 2005
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    muchas gracias rush....I like it too


  • TrulyLoothy
    January 28, 2005
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    very erotic indeed...I like it

  • Edna Sweetlove
    January 28, 2005
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    Bit strong!

    Phew!

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