Drifting in and out of consciousness
Sweet scent of jasmine fills the air
Light from a candle slowy flickering
Cast shadows through the darkened lair
Through the darkness I hear footsteps
I feel the presence of his evil soul
Winding his way down the spiral staircase
My master returns to his darkened hole
Quickly I rise to greet my beloved
I ache to feel his cold embrace
He calls me to him with arms wide open
I see a look of thirst on his face
Wanting to please him, i offer him sustenance
I feel his hunger know his needs
While cradled in the arms of my loving master
I surrender as he gently feeds
Draining me to his satisfaction
We lay silent as dawn draws near
In his arms I am happy and safe
No one can hurt me nothing to fear
Author notes
Written September 14th, 2002
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Quite a tempting read this was. Keep up the wonderful writing, I look forward to further reads
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You are a gifted writer. I enjoy your poetry so much!
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Short spoken and different but still well written.
DimishedFAith -
I love this this is one of my favorite collections you should go futher and make another one like this
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nicely done. very nicely done. Personally i love vampires
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don't touch it!
True love never DIES. Hahahaha..get it..never dies...vampire...uh..nevermind.
Anyway, I really enjoyed this.
Another for the vamp collection file.
Great work.
Thanx.
Rodney -
don't touch it!
fabulous, wonderful write. very senusal. I love vampires as well. hope your holidays are happy. blessed be -
don't touch it!
Great flow simply amazing!!!
-Torn -
don't touch it!
Without a doubt the only vampire poem I have ever read that was worth reading. I loved it! -
excellent
This reminds me of Morgan, who really is a vampire.
Actually, it's quite good. I like it a lot!
Very erotic. Mmmm.
~Colleen -
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As a fully paid up vampire I love this!! 'Blushfulmoon'? ::grins:: No need to blush for this!!
Iain aka Morgan -
don't touch it!
This is so cool, it's got romance, vampires, I'm hooked.
Very sweet and very good.
Your a talented writer!
*Hope* -
excellent
i have a thing for vampires too....
there's acertain sensuality to them- the always get what they want. mmmmm
.......but back to your poem (lol, got sidetracked)
loved it :) the beck and call of your master is quite refreshing, for both you and him. teehee....
you might want to check out my poem 'The Red Room.' i don't know if you believe in past lives, or even remembering things from them, but that poem is exactly that. i started describing the vision i had, and my friend finished my sentence, then said the next i was going to say. freakishly accurate... -
excellent
Very good flow. Enjoyed it very much. Made me feel like I was going to get bit. LOL -
thanks so much all of you
and yes Torn i think (lol)thats a word:)
Blessings you all..
Susan~~~~ -
excellent
Very eeeeeeeerie, like the sense of enthrallment (is that a word ?) -
neutral
the sensuality of the nocturnal predator
captured nicely :) -
don't touch it!
J-chan loves vampires. Did you know? ^.^ Eh...I'll let the rating speak for itself.
~J-chan~ -
don't touch it!
My friend .... you touch a soul with this!
Have you taken mine ?
well done!
Bill -
don't touch it!
I like this a lot. many of my dreams have walked this very screen play. I love it!
Roury -
excellent
Woo.a good write....I thoroughly enjoyed
thanks for sharing
Ann -
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Well written, a hint of the erotic, a touch of mystery and a spoonful of fear. Loved it. -
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Good job. easy to understand and enjoyable to read. reminds me of an anime called 'NightStalker'. good job.
Colle -
excellent
love this, very dark, very sensual. Flow's lovely too.
(garlic at the ready)
Edited by BitGit on Sep 14 because 'can't smell properly'. -
excellent
brilliant susan. i love reading anything along this sort of theme.
Lisa -
Thanks so much Skip
Thanks Mistress Bear
Susan~~ -
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This is awesome Susan! Blood lust causes me goosebumps! :~)
~Best Wishes~ -
don't touch it!
This went together real well. I was impressed by it. The picture fits perfectly. Skip -
Thanks so much for your comment
Nam Barb and Gill
Love ya all lol:)
Susan~~~ -
don't touch it!
Loved this Sis...the flow is cool..nicely done..now put yer fangs away...lol...~~~GILL~~~~ -
excellent
great flow, great write.
:0)
Nam -
excellent
Nice one Susan...i have a thing about vampires..lol..Only person i know who gets turned on by 'Dawn till Dusk' movies.. :)
Barbsxx -
Thanks windsong
Your really from Romania?????
Neat oh!:)
Blessings
Susan
Edited by Blushfulmoon on right now because 'cant fecking spell lol....:)'. -
excellent
well done, again! always the attraction to the dark side....
i should know this, i come from Romania, where Transilvania is.... the vampires!!!!!! :o) :o) :o) -
Why thank you:)
Aardvark32
Blessings
Susan~~ -
don't touch it!
This was very good. I enjoyed reading it...vampires and supernatural things are very cool.
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