Where are you now?
Where did you go?
Where should i look
to find you? How,
am I supposed
to live alone?
Was it my fault?
Or was it yours?
It doesnt even
matter at all.
Can I just please
take everything back?
What can I do?
What can i say,
to make all your
pain just go away?
Where are you now?
Where did you go?
Where should i look
to find you? How,
am I supposed
to live alone?
If I could say,
that I was sorray,
would you...
Oh would you take me back?
I am starting,
to let go.
it seems that I
dont even care.
I just want,
all of this to end!
Where are you now?
Where did you go?
Where should i look
to find you? How,
am I supposed
to live alone?
Author notes
these are the lyrics to a song that im writing ... there may be more and i havent decided whether to repeat the first stanza as a refrain or not... for now i will
please tell me what you think of the refrain as well as the song as a whole
Written January 27th, 2005
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yea lol
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This definately sounds like song lyrics. It's cool though. Wow I haven't been on this site forever...and this is your latest poem (January 27) so it doesn't look as though you have either. Oh well...
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yea i doubt ull hear it on the radio ... unless i could finish it, get it on a cd, and put it on wiqh ...
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Wow, I think this would be a really great song, because the refrain (as well as the rest of it) is something that I think many people can relate to - as I was reading your piece, many thoughts of past experiences came flooding back...anyway, I also think that asking all of those questions was also effective in capturing readers' attention. Well, it would be really cool if you could turn this into a song, and maybe some day I'll hear it on the radio!!
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