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Eye of the Tiger

The wind howls fiercely
The ground covered in frost
She circles around freely
As if she was lost

The night is cool
Her eyes glisten with hunger
As she spots her prey
And she becomes the hunter

The prey she hunts
Is the common man
He stole her cub
And killed her clan

She circles around
Her heart racing s fast
She can’t wait to see
The one who will last

She moves in for the kill
But makes a mistake
She pounces to quickly
And changes the stakes

She winces in pain
And drops to the ground
She closes her eyes
As the world goes around

She joins her cub
As she dies away
But she knows
They’ll meet another day




Author notes

Thanks for the help Jess on the title!!
Written January 27th, 2005

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  • Neko
    January 30, 2005
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    hello hello.....thank you for the comment...and the help on the title, but still this poem was i think the slowest one i wrote b/c of Kevin ohh how i will miss him always reading over my shoulder or how he always read our notes lol...good times in english class eh?..will miss it...but thank you very much for the comment!
    ~jackie
    Edited on Jan 30, 10:32 because 'kevins ghost is haunting me!!!...HELP!!!'.

  • Mnaxcvkj
    January 27, 2005
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    this is an awesme poem jackie!! yay!! i liked it alot! hehe yay for english class and you are very welcome for the tittle! lol
    hugs! jess