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i think it's time to give in

how many times must i lie to you?
how many secrets must i just from you?
"my daughter is fine,
she just keeps crossing the line."
i do all this just to spite you.

you know i'm depressed
just give me some rest
i'm sick and tired of having to fight you

so i guess i'm giving in
i know how much you love to win
but i feel i'd rather kill you

Author notes

its really dumb but i was extremely bored im guitar.
!!!!!!I STOLE THE LAST LINE FROM AN ICP SONG!!!!!!
Written January 27th, 2005

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  • teenage-zombie
    March 1, 2005
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    another great piece. i really like your style. i like the way you think. faboo.


  • Xx Alice xX
    February 3, 2005
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    Depression leads to many acts, some very violent and your write shows that. There is a point when you stop giving up and decided to fight for the life you want back.


  • a696wench696m
    January 27, 2005
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    Well done

    I enjoyed this a lot. As soon as I started reading it, I got a beat in my head. It sounds like an ICP song "How many times must I lie to you...How many times must I try..." Verry good. I liked it. What is it about?