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some kind of hope

everything won't stop spinning out of control
what do you do when life finally takes it's toll?
it seems that death is the only solution
caught in the twist of all the confusion.
i knew that in the midst of all my resentment
no one gets away without proper punishment.
maybe this will be fates final delusion
or maybe a glimpse at a real life illusion.

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Written January 18th, 2005

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  • a696wench696m
    January 27, 2005
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    Awsome!

    I enjoyed this. It expresses how I feel, and you used nice wording. It sounds like an emotionaly poem for you to do. Good job!

  • shootingstars
    January 27, 2005
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    this is a great poem.