If you sing to those who listen
My heart awaits your song
For I've been humbled daily in
Your grace, where lovers long
Harmony, is the whispers of
A hymn we all could share
Many believe, a God of love
Would've made life fair
I look not to the human race
For I see myself as flawed
Though I fail, I seek this place
Where love still conquers all
The shelter of my heart is yours
For what I have, I try to give
A memory, a thought, upon seashores
The tears, I share, the dreams I live
I only know the road of my soul
As I've felt the storm of the sea
I pray to the sky, here down below
For love unconditionally
Author notes
Just some thoughts I jot, thanks for reading me, much love to all, I appreciate your time! 
-Timothy 
Written January 27th, 2005
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Unconditional love is the only love worth having! Anything lesser of it's kind is merely a waste of energy. The flow and rhythm of this piece is pristinely penned and the images that you have to offer are a vow from the center corridor of your soul.
It's a real treat to get to read this, thank you.
She-ra
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This was so beautiful, I loved this piece, i was in shock of how good it was, and sweet background colors, great job, as always. You always have some of the best poems I've ever read! Best poems from I believe the best author lol... My daddy, I love you, keep up the good work!
Love, Little Tim
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Amazing
Beautiful poem about the search for unconditional love. The whole poem flows so beautiful and emits such a peaceful feeling with your words. Awesome poem Dad- you are truly one of the most gifted poets I have ever had the privelege to meet.
"Though I fail, I seek this place
Where love still conquers all"
Beautiful lines- I can't tell you how much they hit home
~Zeek -
words cannot explain the beauty
wow. i wish there were more words in the english language to describe this poem. it was beautiful and sad and hopefull all at the same time. it was one of the best depictions of love that i have ever encountered, it went beyond the traditional sappy hallmark cards and discovered the real roots of love. it was beautiful and flowed like the sea. amazing.
elayna -
Excellent
Oh, how I wish I could write like this! Your words flow naturally, and I never seem to tire reading the content in which I normally feel sick at the sound of (love that is, lol). Breath-taking work my friend, I love it
Kate 
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wow...not much else I can say that hasnt already been said...so I will simlpy say I loved it, applude it...and leave it at that
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I'm speechless. This is so beautiful *Claps repeatedly*
Gosh, it's so beautiful. I have no words. The rhyming was perfect, not forced..it had a perfect flow. I absolutely love the ending. Well...Im gonna stop now before I start repeating myself Thanks for sharing and keep on writing.
~Lana
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Wow...amazing.
When I try to rhyme my poems, they end up sounding amateur and childish. This is simply...breathtaking.
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your poems are all good...I just love them... keep on writing!!!
Lyn
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hmmm.. pretty cool huh.. but i think the one written by angeleyes if im right is much appreciated.. lol.. just kidding.. i thought this one is another entry for purplesky's contest.. but i'm wrong.. but anyways it could be one.. just change your title.. hehehe.. well written my dear..
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This is completely amazing, I really liked it. It flows so well, and your ability to explain these things in words is amazing. AWESOME WORK!
Amanda -
Unconditional love...If only, if only. I wish I could be loved in such a way, and return it as well. mournful
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Awesome
If you know the road of your soul...surely you are already on the journey towards unconditional love...the beauty of this piece tells me--you know it already! -
Wonderful!
Can't top that one above....but I think you wrote an amazing heartfelt piece....I enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing yourself with me.
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i love this poem, the flow and rhyme are perfect. such a beautiful love poem!
I look not to the human race
For I see myself as flawed
Though I fail, I seek this place
Where love still conquers all
these are my favourite lines. love does conquer all! great write x x x -
if future i wont read about religion when pissed off, it exacerbates things.
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You seem to be saying there is more to life than what is apparent. You always do such an excellent job with all your writes Tim. You have your describing words down to a fine art..LOL.
Super Job with this one.
Congrads...
Wayne
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Beautiful write flowed really well and I enjoyed it .
I only know the road of my soul
As I've felt the storm of the sea
I pray to the sky, here down below
For love unconditionally
Just lovely
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very beautifully written...i see that you too feel with your heart and soul as i do....i sometimes have a hard time having such great faith in this world but alas...my world is widely contingent on my soul and my soul usually soars...be well and be blessed....looking forward to reading more pieces like this from you....
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Beautiful
Great poem.... it paints a picture... which is good .... very worth the read!
Ciao -
WOW!!!!! This poem is so wonderful! You write so beautifully with perfect flow and ryhme - it seems effortless. It really reached me too and put me into a trance... wow. thats how i feel. its so beautifully written... thanks for writing.
bravo & cheers
~christina
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Timothy,
Again, you have penned a masterpiece! I can understand the want and need for unconditional love for I feel I already had mine and now it is only something I can remember and yearn for.
You imagery is as usual, totally awesome and you are always a peasure to read!
Love,
Rene'
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very well said.
i try very hard to believe and strive to love unconditionally. i know i'm flawed too and much too hard on myself for it.
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That is a great outlook on life! I agree with you. I see myself as flawed also. great wrods and thanks for sharing them!
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OH BRAVO TIMOTHY BRAVO...This is beautiful beyond words absolutley breath taking The imagery here is how I think that love should be and you put it into such wonderful words
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Excellent! A pleasure to read!
The world needs more like you
who feel the way you do.
The love you give is free,
I give it back unconditionally.
Beautiful poem, Timothy!
Much Love,
Maureen
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Beautiful!
An excellent piece! Your faith is inspiring and words are captivating. A great write...Whispers of the soul, if aptly captured on paper can always create masterpieces and this one does!
BTW, God of Love does exist. He's only too busy with his own love stories to pay heed to anyone else.
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Excellent!
A work that reaches the heart, that reminds us that there is more to life than what we see outwardly; that the world can be a place "where love still conquers all." There is power in this poem, and it is written exceptionally well. The love expressed on your page for your son, and his love for you, is inspiring and touching.
"The shelter of my heart is yours
For what I have, I try to give
A memory, a thought, upon seashores
The tears, I share, the dreams I live"
And you share so selflessly, so beautifully through your words! You have the gift, Poet! Write on!
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I absolutly loved this! the rhyme and flow were flawless and I love the lines
Though I fail, I seek this place
Where love still conquers all
those were my favorite because they describe just how I feel. You have again created a beautiful heartfelt and moving write my dear. I always enjoy reading what your heart has to say.
love and huggles
~Lena
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A lovely thought, I think we all wish it was like that, but is it, I admire your blind faith it is a gift, it is well written and the flow is good,your use of words is also good, I am afraid I opened my eyes long ago to how this world is, dont get me wrong I hold the highest respect for how you feel, good write
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You Rock
Hey man this is really good,you have talent here,cool write. I hope to read more of your write,you rock. I have no points to applaud this piece,but I will give you Two Thumbs Up on this wonderful write. Thanks for sharing with us,rock on poet
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huh? this was pretty dope, I dislike the concept of god though for I despise him as I do: Santa Clawz, Easter bunny and the tooth fairy. Childhood memories, cliched trendy lies to keep the kids in line. umm, It's just not right to lie to your kid all his life. *Cough* anyways, I'm rambling, I liked the 4 line stanza's, to me whether I read it too fast or too slow, whichever way I read it seem to be the perfect speed. It was sewn together with stitches meant to never be severed. Tight Write.
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an endless parade of the heart from the master of verse ... as always so serene and so delicately beautiful
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this is really good , i love the ideas that you use in this poem !! really great work ! Its so brillaintly written one of the best flowing and sounding poems i have read in ages and ages ! Its a sweet and cute poem ! thankyou very much for sharing it with us ! x
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