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As We Stand in a Sunny Pleasure Dome of Pilfered Poetry

 (a farewell love letter relayed, and a journey through old poetry...) 
  

 




1.           He bid me to send you this goodbye:
2.            Run from Gerald Griffin's cloud which over his pathway glooms-
3.           it must never break upon thee!

 

4.           Before you run, he asks but one request-
5.            when Ella Wheeler Wilcox's sun grows dim and her winds blow cold
6.           upon his bosom where Alfred Joyce Kilmer's snow has lain,
7.            and as Alfred, Lord Tennyson's waves break, break, break
8.           over the cold, gray stones of his love-torn sea,
9.            wrench Percy Bysshe Shelley's rivets from his quivering wounds
10.         whose many-voicèd Echoes are heard through the mists...

 

11.          Don't shed a tear for him, he implores-
12.           he's learned not to fear Theodore Roethke's infinity- that dying of time
13.          in the white light of tomorrow...
14.           He is but a T. S. Eliot Hollow Man- a stuffed man, just a twinkling of a fading star-
15.          quiet and meaningless, as wind in dry grass, or rats' feet over broken glass...
16.            while you- of your choice virtues only God should speak, 
17.           or Roethke's English poets who grew up on Greek.  So you see, it would never work out...

 

18.           and he gives you this confession:
19.            He loved your lips when they were wet with Ella's wine,
20.          and especially when they were red with a wild desire!
21.           He just wish he'd have kissed you when the two of you met,
22.          jumping from the Leigh Hunt chair he sat in,
23.            (though the little horse Robert Frost gave him would have thought it queer)...
24.           He wondered when Tennyson's dancers would leave you alone-
25.            he knew you were weary of dance and play.
26.           He also bids thee this, and I quote: "O my love, my many Tennyson-fountain'd love,
27.            dear dearest of loves, hear me: Harken ere I die!"

28.           He was seen on a path that leads to  Corinne Roosevelt's nowhere-
29.            in a meadow that you know, where together you have sometimes found your souls;
30.           and remembering friends like Henry Van Dyke who know and dare to say
31.            the brave sweet words that cheer the way- he said
32.           it was only you who laughed as softly as Elizabeth Barrett Browning sighs,
33.            and who sang beyond the genius of Wallace Stevens' sea,
34.           and it was you alone who walked in beauty in the cloudless climes and starry skies of Lord Byron...

 

35.           So dry your tears, your big idle Tennyson tears, that, from the depth of your divine despair
36.          which gathers in your heart and rises in your eyes- such sorrow waves Edgar Allen Poe's curtain canopy
37.            so fitfully, so fearfully- and you're giving him nightmares! Stop already!

38.           Before we parted, he wept, "God bless you and Edna St. Vincent Millay for the apples and the pears 
39.            you gave him"; you know, that time when he gave you all his money except his subway fare.
40.          At last he departed for Ralph Waldo Emerson's woodland walks
41.            and to birds and trees he talked, just like RW did, and
42.          with William Wordsworth's transitory being in the eye of nature
43.            and two of Emily Dickinson's butterflies, he went out at noon
44.           and waltzed above a stream, and the espied the circumference, and caught a ride with him.
45.            "We?" as he described his wonderful times with you, "We would turn,
46.           and we'd stand in Tennyson's heart of things, leaving our books behind!"

47.            "Books?" He would say, like Wordsworth, "Tis a dull and endless strife!" So the two of you would learn from nature...

 

48.            "God bless Roethke's ground", he said; he would walk softly there, thinking of you; 
49.           and learn by going where he has to go,
50.            and that, if you were there, together you would build a dome in air-
51.             a sunny pleasure dome- with caves of ice;
52.            and all who heard Samuel Taylor Coleridge would see you there-
53.             where Shelley's crystal-winged snow would run down the slanted sunlight of the dawn
54.            and whistle through your hair in a beautifully fierce and mighty gale...

 

55.            "With you", he said as he bid farewell, "It was a hand at first, and then they let you kiss-
56.             he went beyond, it was quite a crime!"
57.             it was not Lord Byron's fault, he'd tell you all the time...














Lines and the Poems They Were Pilfered From:

2,3:  Gerald Griffin "A Place in Thy Memory"

 

5:  Ella Wheeler Wilcox "Growing Old"
6:  Alfred Joyce Kilmer "Trees"
7,8:  Alfred, Lord Tennyson "Break Break Break"
9, 10:  Percy Bysshe Shelley "Prometheus Unbound"

 

12,13.  Theodore Roethke "The Far Field"
14,15:  T. S. Eliot "Hollow Men"
16, 17:  Theodore Roethke "I Knew a Woman"

 

19, 20:  Ella Wheeler Wilcox "I Love You"
21, 22:  Leigh Hunt "Jenny Kissed Me"
23.  Robert Frost "Stopping By Woods on a Snowy Evening"
24, 25:  Alfred, Lord Tennyson "Maud"
26, 27:  Alfred, Lord Tennyson "OEnone"

 

28, 29:  Corinne Roosevelt "Path that Leads to Nowhere"
30, 31:  Henry Van Dyke "A Mile With Me"
32:  Elizabeth Barrett Browning "A Woman's Shortcomings"
33:  Wallace Stevens "The Idea of Order at Key West"
34:  Lord Byron "She Walks in Beauty"

 

35:  Alfred, Lord Tennyson "Tears, Idle Tears"
36, 37:  Edgar Allen Poe "The Sleeper"
38, 39:  Edna St. Vincent Millay "Recuerdo"
40, 41:  Ralph Waldo Emerson "Woodnotes"
42:  William Wordsworth "The Old Cumberland Beggar"
43, 44:  Emily Dickinson "Two butterflies went out at noon"
45, 46:  Alfred, Lord Tennyson "Maud"
47:  William Wordsworth "The Tables Turned"

 

48, 49:  Theodore Roethke "The Waking"

 

50,51,52:  Samuel Taylor Coleridge "Kubla Khan"
53,54: Percy Bysshe Shelley "Prometheus Unbound"

 

55, 56, 57: Lord Byron "Don Juan" Canto I, Stanzas 79-80

 

 

Author notes

"RW"- Ralph Waldo

just fixed all the links and did a bit of tweaking.
See above for links for pilfered poems...
I've deduced that this poem is a semi-cento- and therefore worth only a half-a-cent...
I've commented on all the oldpoetry contained herein, and supplied a poem where the old poet had no poems listed yet...

To anyone contemplating writing a semi-cento:
A poem like this goes through 200-300 edits, maybe more now... a comma here, a semicolon there, syntax, clarity, flow, additions, deletions, changes, form, compulsion, links, a penchant for fiddling... as it is slowly molded into something that creates sensible images first, then moves the emotion later... all the while remaining first and foremost a portal into old poetry, and not just a pretty poem playfully pilfering from poets of the past...

P.S. Why did I select the above poems? I had recorded all the above poems (or parts thereof, or abstract rearrangements of) in song back in the mid 80's; maybe I'll link them here someday for your amusement... why did I stop putting old poetry to song? I ran out of words! I was scraping bottom, digging through the New Yorker even (which gave me several good modern pieces)... perhaps here I will make further discoveries (and train my voice or hire a real singer to continue)...
Written January 27th, 2005

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  • nichtmich silver member
    August 5, 2008

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    Well researched and well penned, a mixture well concocted that yields som amazing new insights from beloved works.


  • Room without doors gold member
    August 5, 2008

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    Outstanding

    There were so many lines in this that I remembered and I loved the mix of old and new. You have created an excellent poem that breaks the barriers with the past and makes it fresh and exciting. You can tell that a lot of work has gone into this poem and I think it was time well spent. I believe that old poetry is just as valid today and that there is a lot to be learnt from the old poets. They provide the building bricks for our work today and we must judge ourselves by their standards. Over all a fasinating poem - I read it through a few times as I enjoyed reading it so much


  • Riamh
    August 5, 2008

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    My word! Or more to the point ~ your word! What an imaginative piece of writing! It must have taken you forever.

  • Willow
    January 29, 2005
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    You have woven here a masterpiece. Congratulations on the Gold Trophy I enjoyed reading it.

    ~Willow~


  • Pierre Richards
    January 28, 2005
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    fantastic!

    What a wonderful piece of creative workmanship as well as writing!
    The way you mixed these together to come up with this wonderful piece is simply amazing.
    This was a pure pleasure to read your musing through the wonderful pages of OldPoetry, and a beautiful poem created!
    I had not read Samuel Taylor Coleridge "Kubla Khan", sense college, and it was a favorite of mine then.


  • Touchof1der silver member
    January 28, 2005
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    You sir, have not only been a great challenge all by yourself... following your tracks all over the pages of OldPoetry and reading the marvelous works you have selected for this wonderful entry, but you have also referenced some of my most favorite author's and poems. Not only that... I noticed on more than one occasion, you added to our vast warehouse of works, by contributing poetry that was not yet on the books here. And yes, I also noticed how carefully you linked each line to the work it was taken from in OldPoetry, making my job of checking your work, s-o-o-o much easier. I was very appreciative. Thank you! I would not evenhazard a guess as to how long this charming piece took you, but I imagine it was very time consuming. Thank you for entering our contest. I truly hope you enjoyed your time spent in OldPoetry. Good luck in the contest!
    ♥ Kimberly

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