You walk along corridors,
Pretending its O.K,
you hold your head up high,
afraid to fall from the sky.
Don't be scared.
I'll catch you.
You're never alone,
You go to Party's,
You get drunk,
and dance.
You hide from yourself,
This pain builds up inside,
Yet still,
You hide.
Don't be scared,
to come out from the dark,
I'll always be your light
For you,
I'll burn bright.
Another day,
You find other ways,
to pretend it's all o.k.
You sit alone,
In your dark dark room,
To match your cold cold heart.
But trust me,
I know,
That inside,
Is a fire,
I'll tame it with my heart,
Full for you,
Tear shaped rain.
Author notes
I choose Number 6. Crash and burn.
Written January 26th, 2005
A contest entry
- Savage garden by lollylou.
320 points, ended February 4, 2005, 5 entries
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this is soo luvly. Don't be scared,
to come out from the dark,
I'll always be your light
is such a luvly line. u did well babe xXx -
this is interesting... this has to be one of my favourite songs by savage garden, and you have captured it well. i'm not too sure about the wonky layout.. i think it could have done without it but all the same a very good effort... lolly x
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