We've been fans of each other for sometime -
Conversations upon the phone take on our love of prose -
Like seasoning on soul food -
A southern fried affair -
Merely acquaintances who desiring to be much more -
Afraid to tell just how they feel for fear of rejection -
Sending e-mails to his beloved also hiding his erection -
No longer content with the trivialities of one night stands -
For what is now sought most sincerely -
Is love between this woman and man -
She can feel his flavor in his expressions -
Talking sexy just shy of phone sex -
Both knowing full well just what the other is saying -
I want to make love to you right now -
Desiring each other upon smooth silken sheets -
She shudders verbally over the phone -
Too late to play it off -
Pouring out their souls -
Seeking a lovers leads -
Making suggestions pretending at first -
Noticing the depth of what's conveyed -
The human animal now awakened in them -
He slumps back into his leather chair -
The date is set as they hang up their phones -
Thinking a million thoughts and now that their alone -
Going each to they're on bed both dream -
Off each other on smooth silken sheets -
Smacking lips can almost taste -
The desire strong like black coffee -
Sweetened with honey and topped off with cream of Ire -
Jumping out of bed as if someone screamed fire -
Awaken by the intensity of their desires -
A cab is called in the middle of the night -
Again such happening under the moons pale light -
The car pulls up in front of the house -
As a satin and lace clad lovely steps out -
Dashing to the door and knocks once -
Knowing that she is expected -
It opens quickly to let her in -
So she'll not be detected -
Candle lights flickers from inside the bed room -
Casting a reflective light off of smooth silken sheets -
Passion sweeping in waves over her heavenly body -
As his arms embrace her like the orbit of the moon -
He needn't knock for she has already came -
Sticky, sweaty bodies wrapped in smooth silken sheets -
Pouring warm chocolate sauce upon her -
She's the dessert that tempted too long -
Licking ravenously as she sighs deliciously -
Arching her back push her delight into his face -
A probing tongue make great haste -
Lips suck her soft center of joy -
As eyes roll back in uncontrolled pleasure -
Hands hold his head steadily as he licks her readily -
Enough she screams aloud unable to control it -
He kisses her softness so he can watch her squirm -
Ooh you son sweet black of a bitch -
Come hitter she says in the language of lovers -
Man hood stands like a shining obelisk -
All glistening with sweat -
She catches hold of him with her hand -
He convulses as a hot eager mouth engulfs -
Skills seldom seem in such an unseemly pair -
He grabs the bed an gasps for air -
Ragged heart beats pounding like waves upon a mountain -
Within her hands and eternal fountain -
She mounts him and dances the dance of lovers -
On smooth silken sheets they bed -
A scream of sweet Ecstasy booms aloud -
The lights go on in several homes -
Realising just what they heard -
Aroused couples follow suit -
In a cacophony of erotic bliss -
Our two lovers now deep asleep -
Oblivious to the world interconnected embraced -
Upon smooth silken sheets they bed -
Author notes
I felt inspired to do one more piece of erotic prose to get more of it out of my system and out in the open. How you enjoy it as much as I liked writting it.
Written January 26th, 2005
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"Like seasoning on soul food -
A southern fried affair -
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Pouring warm chocolate sauce upon her -
She's the dessert that tempted too long -
Licking ravenously as she sighs deliciously -
Arching her back push her delight into his face -
A probing tongue make great haste -"
Haha I'm from the South (TX).Man so many references to food makes me hungry
What a nice erotic piece. When you have the words inside, you just gotta get them out, right? lol.
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you have conveyed desire well in this piece.
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That would indeed be something to behold and it's fitting that a poet should write about a poet. Thank you my friend for the wonderful words yet again.
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very descriptive and very scene setting. well done.
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Amazing write. There was amazing feeling put into this and I really enjoyed the ending. Keep up the great work.
I hope you don't mind me pointing out a few typos.
Thinking a million thoughts now that their alone - "their" should be "they're"
He grabs the bed an gasps for air - "an" should be "and" -
I'll tell you right now that this was fucking awesome. This has got to be the absolute best erotica poem I have ever read! This deserves endless applauses and I am definitely bookmarking this!
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Thank you for reading this piece.
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I almost passed on reading this. The title didn't hit me, and I was just about to click off when something caught my eye. Your lines about seasoning soul food and souther fried affair drew me in, so I read it.
Other than a few areas where you had some typo's and some misplaced tense that threw off the flow, I did enjoy this. I liked it when you stayed farther away from the first person, and kept it more mysterious and vague.
Glad I stayed for this!
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Sensually Done
A lovely vivid erotic poem full of desires and wants.You write this kind of poetry with what seems a lot of experience..
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Hello there and thank you for the kind comments along the way. I thought that was a lovely pic on your site and then it vanished. Such a lovely pic.
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Well, thank you very much. Glad to be of service and thank you for the kind comment.
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Hello friend, I got your message about a team up. What have you got in mind?
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wow..beautifull erotica again my friend!
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!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! wow, so sexy! I love it, and I can see that you enjoyed writing it...wow, this is just really sexy...made me horny
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ahaa! another piece of information as to you, very interesting, our friend has erotic dreams, I very nice piece, torrid, and sensual but at the same time very natural, well done my friend, soon I shall be able to write your autobiography, very interesting
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