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Inside my head

my head is where i like to be
its a place that i can be me
i can see all things i want to see
but in reality it is not me
with my friends i am nothing like i should be
over the top that's me
he is the person i don't want to be
but it is not me

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Written January 26th, 2005

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  • Nihima
    November 6, 2005
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    Luke I know exactly how you feel!
    I often feel that the only place that I can trully be who I am is in my mind!
    When I try to show who I really am everyone thinks I'm ill or something!
    I try to express how I feel in my drawings! but no one seems to notice or they just laugh at them!


  • Methadone Pretty
    January 27, 2005
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    awwwwww tis sweetness
    gd write
    XxxelmojonesxX

  • Momentaryhappiness
    January 27, 2005
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    Hey luke, this is an interesting write. You shouldn't feel like this. You should be able to be yourself with your friends.
    Good write.
    Dani xx