Stop asking for that little child,
the one who used to laugh and play,
the one who you enjoyed seeing each day,
the little girl who made you feel proud whenever she simply just smiled.
She learned that world was a facade,
with relentless nights filled by heartbroken tears,
with the truth actually being our worst fears,
with no longer a belief in this so called God.
Why can't you accept she's no longer what she used to be,
suffering each day with such a depression,
suffering each week in a psychiatric session,
suffering each hour when it'll be her you refuse to see.
No longer ask for that person,
because she won't be walking through that door,
because she doesn't exist anymore,
because if you continue she will only worsen.
Stop asking for someone who's no longer here,
she won't just magically reappear.
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i hate people pressuring me on who I am now.. and the little angel girl i used to be..just..leave me alone..
Written January 25th, 2005
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*blinks* wow I can really relate to that ^^ Pretty sweet. Nice write woman!
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I know the feeling all to well my friend!
Huggles for you.
It's sad when people can not except you for who you are.
I know from expereience. It took many years to even like myself because of the crap I was fed growing up -
pozo hecho.. this was a really good piece, i love it! I know where your comin form with this, from the god thing to the depression.
My family expects me to be the perfect little happy go lucky white girl they made me out to be.. when im not at all. Ppl just dont understand...
good job chica..
mucha luv,
ChRiStInA
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wow! I really like this poem! It's very deep and I really understand the sentiment. I love the way you expressed it! It's simple but has a lot of power. The rhyme never felt forced, but really worked for the poem. Nice job!
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great write it just pulls you straight into it, and that third stanza just hit me, and you keep falling deeper and deeper into it. this is a great write babe. i never knew the lil angel girl, but i love who you are now. nice job on this piece
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Excellent. Nothing more to say. It's not perfect, but nothing ever will be. I like this alot, it appeals to my tastes, and just hit me like a ton of bricks before I even finished the first stanza.
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Wow, This is a really great poem Sun. Trust me, I know how you feel.
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*thinks he accepts you for who you are* painful write to read Sun, i wish you could be accepted for who you are and what you believe
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Aww...Sun I know how you feel, people trying to get you to change because they don't accept for who you really are. People, parents, etc. don't understand because life's being a bitch and you're trying to get over it. People don't stay small and innocent forever, and we're proving that. We grow up, our parents weren't always 10 years old, or they wouldn't even know how to raise kids. They won't leave us alone, they're constantly questioning us for who we are...well, great poem...luf ya...
~Eric~
Edited on Jan 25, 11:21 p.m. because 'damn spelling'. -
Thats really good and its powerful i get exactly what its saying and i am sure a lot of others do to.
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Wow - this says alot about growing up and how sometimes people don't realize how jaded you can end up from simply living.
<3 Ang
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