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Chris

Hes sweet in so many pages
Understanding one is to become him
He's the truth front to back
Lies are never told by his sweet innocent mouth
Covered in black chalk, he stairs with his wide open eyes
Hurts like a human but takes it like an angel
Truly a gentleman hidden inside a loving structure
Your truly unique, don't change for it'll make me miserable
Only a soul like this shows that relationships exists
With grace and talent u spot each light
A monument to pray from for a happy ending

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For chris on ap zehnten...thanx for everythin 3)
Written January 25th, 2005

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  • Bungalow Bill
    October 3, 2005
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    Very, very good...


  • kjack
    February 1, 2005
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    This is beautiful indeed. I have thoroughly enjoyed reading all of these tributes to the men of AP. So many times some poets get taken for granted. It is nice to see them lifted up in praise. Excellent job on this write. Thanks so much for entering the contest, and good luck to you.

    becca


  • zehnten
    January 26, 2005
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    chris is lucky to have you by his side, thank you, from the deepest bottom of my heart


  • SEA angel gold member
    January 25, 2005
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    Chris is quite lucky to have someone who cares enough to write a poem in tribute of him. I have had the hardest time figuring out the perfect text color for this border and you have found the perfect one. Good luck in contest.