Gordo and Ham are on a quest,
To destroy the One Paperclip of doom.
They are the two who beat the rest,
And want to eat a mushroom.
One day as they sat on hay,
A strange visitor came by,
He looked as old as 100 years and a day.
He brought some donuts and pie.
"OUCH!" the author screamed.
"That really really hurt!"
She had broken her fingernail it seemed.
"I'll just eat some sherbet"
They made their way to the end.
The adventure was over at last.
"But first I have to use the U-bend."
"Hurry Gordo you better do it fast!"
They destroyed the One Paperclip
And yes, they did it well.
Aside from their food being paint chips,
Everything went swell.
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Written January 25th, 2005
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This was funny, and original! How did you come up with that? I think my favorite part was the paint chips... it just explains so much! Great job!
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Hi there,
I feel that this was funny and interesting to read. You have done a great job here. I hope to read more from you soon.
Best of wishes to you and yours
Blue moon
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PAINT CHIPS FROM HELL! AHHHA!
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great
Funny Carly!!! -
This is funny and interesting. I did see two problems with it though. ^^
"He look as old as 100"
"look" should be looked. ^^
and "sherbert" is supposed to be spelled "sherbet" ^^
Just thought you ought to know. Thanks a lot for entering and good luck in the contest. ^^
Kellogs
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