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i bang my head against the wall
as your voice echos in my head
i crawl across the room
and throw myself onto the bed

this never ending struggle
you force onto me
what the fuck did i do to you
i wish i could just be free

blare the radio
lock the door
scream into my pillow
till i can feel no more

no where to go
i cant escape
no where to hide
cuz this family's fake

blare the radio
lock the door
scream into my pillow
till i can feel no more...

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Written January 23rd, 2005

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  • denying my truth
    February 26, 2005
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    thank you, yea they kinda turned out that way, thanks again for the comment.
    ~k~


  • rhiannon 11
    February 25, 2005
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    Damn...wow. This is pretty good...sounds like lyrics...actually...well done
    rhiannon 11

  • denying my truth
    January 27, 2005
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    THANX TO EVERYBODY

  • Kiku
    January 27, 2005
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    awww *huggle* Very good jod! Tho sad I did like this a lot.

    Go You!!!
    Mattea


  • josh-13
    January 26, 2005
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    Hey, I can relate to this one. Usualy I just blair my guitar so I can't hear anyone complaining. You did an awesome job on this one, I love it. Your an awesome poet so you better keep writing. josh

  • Scarred Tears
    January 25, 2005
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    thats really awesome. thats kinda my life. keep on!


  • January 25, 2005
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    i like how you used that 'blare the radio' line more than once...Nice Job..sometimes i feel this way so i know where your coming from nice job

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