no one knows how i feel
no one knows what love that i feel
but i don't know if its real
the love i feel
inside my heart
i know its not real
her looks, her smile
i wish for a while
that she could feel
the way i do
at least i would know
if its real
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Written January 25th, 2005
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woah luke writing a love poem crazy! awsome but crazy! this is brilliant though welldone
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Awww.. just go for it!
Great stuff X
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awwwwwwwwwww tis a sweetness poem luke
i enjoyed pondering as to who this is about...but having read the above comments, i feel i need not ponder anymore
tis a kewl poem chook
prod prod
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This is good, short and sweet. It's a question that many people ask themselves. I hope you find the answer sometime.
Dani xx -
Well Done
A great look into the mind of one just starting out on the journey of young adulthood. You have captured the age old question that we have all had to ask ourselves at one time or another. This I found to be very expressive and written quite well. Keep it up Luke. (I think it would look and read better if you edit the no wons to no one)
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Yeah... SURE this isn't about Dani! It so obviously is.. unless.. MARIE! It's either Dani or Marie.. but it's cute, you may want to know that it's "no one" not "no won" you silly blonde spikey haired thingy! Collaboration with yes? Who's yes?
Woo
Happy Wednesday 26th January 2005
Ju
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