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Broken Reflection

My reflection is broken
From years of abuse and hate
Blood stains the glass
And I fear its to late
To save me
Or any part of my soul
I'm sorry that is broken girl
Is all you'll ever know
But you throw some of the stones
That broken my reflection
Because I wasn't like you
And didn't mirror your perfection
I try to piece everything together
Hurting myself along the way
Bruises, scraps, and cuts
That will never fade
My reflection is broken
And that's all you'll ever see
Broken bits of glass
That use to be me

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I wrote this poem a while ago. Just now found it.
Written January 25th, 2005

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  • sporadicwrites
    February 15, 2005
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    Very interesting way of putting things in perspective. Seems like you are or were a fragmented young soul. Just do you best to put yourself back together and be stronger than ever. I do hope that you eventually find that peace within yourself that so many of us are searching for.
    MW

  • will-bob
    February 7, 2005
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    tears hit the keys

    i kept reading and reading and i felt the words your expressing...so umm rock on and be happy.

  • pozo
    January 27, 2005
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    Wow, this is a really sad poem- well written but extremely sad. Keep writing because this was an excellent poem
    Thanks for your comment on my poem
    All the best,
    Pozo


  • Paint Me Beautiful
    January 26, 2005
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    wow this is really really good. keep up the great work and i will continue to read your wonderful poetry...

    ~Amber~

  • Emtje
    January 25, 2005
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    it`s like u read my mind...hihi,very god write


  • January 25, 2005
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    Very Good.

    This was very deep and I liked it much. Good Job.

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