Everyone came in and sat quietly,
no one moved,
no one spoke
their fearful eyes,
glued on the teacher,
who in their eyes turned into a beast,
because thats what he was,
a beast,
an intimidating and heartless beast.
Their hearts pounded in unition,
all eyes glued on the beast,
watching his every move,
cringing when he came near,
fearful he would pounce on them,
like a lion,
a large, mean, and heartless lion,
roaring, and clawing, and biting their backs.
They were afraid,
afraid because he was a cruel beast,
the king of all beast,
the large intimidating, heartless beast,
was the 8th grade,
Red team,
Social Studies teacher
Author notes
This poem I wrote in school today in Skillblock about my social studies teacher who happens to also be my reading and skillblock teacher. These are kind of our feelings towards him. The Red team thing is because in my school there are 2 teams in a grade and mine is the Red team, thats why it says that :)
Written September 12th, 2002
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lol. I find this funny. I have a worse teacher. She just loves to be intimidating though, plus she's an awesome teacher. No one ever talks or even has the nerve to drop a pencil in her class, but it works cause we all sit up straight, and listen. lol. This is cool, you got your feelings out very well. Thank you for commenting on my piece.
luv,
Jean -
looooooool, you should let your teach read this
thanks for your commentso n my stories , lol sorry for being late in replying -
hung jury
quite interesting, thats what everyone said of me, but the teachers. interesting read. but im not sure what to think..... sorry -
ohhh i miss middle school lol its great don't worry the teachers don't seam so scary in high school, this was a fun poem lol great write!! very cute!
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hahaha great i loved it! like the title and word you used for him. a beast hahahaha...
luv
Bebe -
Thanks for the comment, Mr.Sweatt, the beast, isn't so bad. I'm a good student so he's really nice to me. He's ver interesting though, social studies is my favorite class because he just makes is really interseting that you can't help b ut be quiet (but you kindda have to unless you want him to pounce on you, lol). Yeah, but hes gotten much better, Im not afraid of him, even though he's giving us a 4-7 page term paper! But anyways, thanks for reading!
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You'll learn how to avoid and get along with him. I really liked this poem especially the part about him being a lion and such
CaSeY -
Thanks, its getting better though, I just stay out of his way and I dont get into trouble.
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excellent
im sorry your teacher is so horrible! good luck getting through the year! -
I know its not that serious but he even makes himself sound like a monster by the thigs he says to us and tells us and basically he does tell us that he is a monster. If ur good then hes ok thats why Im really good and nice in his class, not that Im not anyway, but Im extremely nice and stuff. I have seen when people that haven't and it wasn't a pretty sight, they never acted up again in his class, so that goes to show you that he is pretty bad. But I do understand where ur coming from and maybe its not as bad as I described it but its just a poem and poems can be made up a little. Thanks for the comments!
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it's not that serious. see what you think at the end of the semester. you might this teacher to be one of your best and most challenging. good luck -
Thanks for reading my poem, I think this one came out pretty good the teacher is really like a beast so thispoem isn't far fromthe truth lol :)
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