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Baby Love

Ooooouuuuuuuu baby, I love your lovely smile
Ooooouuuuuuuu baby, you had me all the while


For when it comes to loving you
It's oh, so easy to do
I adore your touch, through and through
For when it comes to loving you
It's oh, so easy to do


Ooooouuuuuuuu baby, I hear your heartstrings play
Ooooouuuuuuuu baby, How those hips are fit to sway


Just one wish, just one kiss
For only you, my heart beats bliss
Love me do, and do the twist
Just one wish, just one kiss
For only you, my heart beats bliss


All my loving ways are yours
All the days upon seashores
You are the one, I do adore
All my loving ways are yours
All the days upon seashores


Ooooouuuuuuuu baby, take me in your loving arms
Ooooouuuuuuuu baby, sprinkle me with lucky charms


Just one wish, just one kiss
For only you, my heart beats bliss
Love me do, and do the twist
Just one wish, just one kiss
For only you, my heart beats bliss


Ooooouuuuuuuu, baby, I love you
Ooooouuuuuuuu, baby, Oh, so true
I love you, yes I do
I love you, yes I do
Yes, Yes, always, I love you


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Something new, I had fun with this piece, made me feel all warm and fuzzy inside, heehee! Much -Timothy
Written January 25th, 2005

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  • Sharon Corr gold member
    January 28, 2005
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    Timothy a very cool song in red-hot colours of love
    You’re turning me in your love songs
    You have a heart made for sharing
    And somehow your song reminding me of this love song
    Ooooooooooooooo ooooooooooooooo
    Ooooooooooooooo ooooooooooooooo
    Ooooooooooooooo ooooooooooooooo
    Love me baby the way you do
    Love me baby in your heartstrings oh, so true
    Love me baby my heartbeats just for you
    Love me baby it’s so easy to love you
    Love me baby and don’t say may be
    Love me baby and drive me crazy
    Ooooooooooooooo ooooooooooooooo
    Ooooooooooooooo ooooooooooooooo
    Ooooooooooooooo ooooooooooooooo



    Love Me Do Lyrics

    Beatles

    Love Me Do
    Beatles
    (Please Please Me)
    Love, love me do.
    You know I love you,
    I'll always be true,
    So please, love me do.
    Whoa, love me do.
    Love, love me do.
    You know I love you,
    I'll always be true,
    So please, love me do.
    Whoa, love me do.
    Someone to love,
    Somebody new.
    Someone to love,
    Someone like you.
    Love, love me do.
    You know I love you,
    I'll always be true,
    So please, love me do.
    Whoa, love me do.
    Love, love me do.
    You know I love you,
    I'll always be true,
    So please, love me do.
    Whoa, love me do.
    Yeah, love me do.
    Whoa, oh, love me do.


  • January 26, 2005
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    Lovely dedication... just promise me Yoko Ono won't get her hands on it... I can imagine
    her with that OOOOoooouuuuu
    I am sure your voice sounds beautiful otherwise you wouldn't dare sing such sounds or would you? ~ag


  • smiley
    January 26, 2005
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    I had as much fun reading this as you probably did writing it.

    Yvonne


  • twinzy001
    January 26, 2005
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    very nice timothy...I played a jingle in my head when I read this fine piece of yours Bravo you do well with your work great job!


  • January 26, 2005
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    i liked it. it was different. had a nice flow and feel to it.


  • Energizer Bunny
    January 26, 2005
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    Oh Tim, you certainly do have a wonderful way with words my friend. Your pen has turned out another great one!! Beautiful choice of words.

    A very very nice read. You said you had fun with this one. I don't know why Tim but in my writing, sometimes my "fun ones", reach people quicker than the serious ones. This one will surely reach many people too.

    Excellent!

    ~Wayne


  • teardrop gold member
    January 26, 2005
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    This was fun to read. I even read it to my boyfriend in a singsong. Love it Timothy. I can hear music to it now!!

    Love,

    Rene'


  • Vickie J
    January 25, 2005
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    This was totally enjoyable! So light hearted and upbeat and of course singing to your sweetie, makes it that much more special.


  • Ladybug
    January 25, 2005
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    do your lucky charms have marshellows in purple and leprochons too?!!
    this was so cute and I bet you are on your knee's singing this to your lovely doe tonight as she pulls the devae' covers back ready to lay in the hay and make new heart strings to be remembered.....
    LOL, you tickle me funny


  • Diamond
    January 25, 2005
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    Beautiful!

    My only regret is that I can't actually hear you sing your song and strum your guitar but, I can picture you in a dimly lit cafe singing your songl while an audience of poets and music lovers sip champagne and tap their feet to the musical beat. This is something I've been wanting to do, write a song but just don't know how or where to begin. You've done an AWESOME job with this poem/song. Maybe someday I can hear you sing it in person. Thanks for sharing you.

    All my love,

    Avril
    Edited on Jan 25, 10:14 p.m. because ''.


  • blueangel4u
    January 25, 2005
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    I REALLY LOVE YR POEM LOVE ALWAYS THE BLUE IN EVERY ANGEL AKA LEAH


  • cherche -d -ame
    January 25, 2005
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    Oooooooooooouuuuuuuu baby , I can hear that crooning ,
    that will have the ladies swooning
    ooooooooooooouuuuuuu baby , You are such a romantic
    weaver of the poetic
    ooooooooooooooouuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu BABY
    zzzzz
    Reenie

    Edited on Jan 25, 6:55 p.m. because ''.


  • magicalprincess
    January 25, 2005
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    hey tim cool lyrics that guitar is really cool you should buy it for timmy...lol
    much love
    ~magicalprincess


  • queenie
    January 25, 2005
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    it is a fun sounding song and it suits the modern stuff the kids go for today.i call them lolloipop songs for the sell well and give you the feel of being happy and carefree.the music has to be upbeat and sort of prissy.


  • poeticpieces
    January 25, 2005
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    Great Love Song!!!

    What can I say Dad, when you got it, you got it!
    I like this, enjoy the overall flow of it all...You rock!!!!
    Thanks for penning this, I'll be back to read more of ya laters, I want that guitar, can you buy me one? LOL!

    Love your son, lil Tim


  • blueangel4u
    January 25, 2005
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    Excellent Song!

    A song we all can enjoy, if we have love in our hearts, or for another, thanks for sharing you, you always sing, write, and share your heart so wonderfully!

    blueangel4u

  • nellymichelle
    January 25, 2005
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    Het this is nice.....
    It rhymes very well and the word chosen are just wonderful...
    I can just relate....
    It's wonderful...
    Keep it going..
    thanks for sharing


  • Empathy-eyes
    January 25, 2005
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    Aww this is a beautifully fun write, I really liked the strong aspect of love and lyrics in this. Everything seemed to combine with talent Excellent... Kate


  • Dragonsblood
    January 25, 2005
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    very cute song well thats what it sounds like anyways and the repeatative voice of love and warm reminds me of the Beatles and some of thier tunes. At least thats the music I put to these lyrics. Good beat and rhythm.

  • oumer
    January 25, 2005
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    I am really sorry if I hurt your feelings but I have been here only one week, and already sick of all the "Oh how beautiful", "never read anything like this" comments that give no real feedback to the writer. We are here to learn so I think it will speed us if we start commenting honestly, instead of writing a crappy one liner, just for the sake of earning some points!


  • January 25, 2005
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    Very warm and fuzzy....a great song (it's a song, right?) It's really all the lovey-dovey stuff, and I think that's what you were hoping this would be when writing this. So, congrats on the success!

    take care,
    -->aref


  • Blazing White Wolf
    January 25, 2005
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    This a very good write. I love this song even the "lucky charms" well maybe not loved But the chprus is great~~~~
    Just one wish, just one kiss
    For only you, my heart beats bliss
    Love me do, and do the twist
    Just one wish, just one kiss
    For only you, my heart beats bliss
    ~~~~Love and Light~~~~
    ~~Blaze~~

  • oumer
    January 25, 2005
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    Bad

    If only you wrote this fourty years ago
    you would have made some fortune
    by selling it to some shabby bands
    No, not to the Doors or the Stones

    but I think it is still very suitable
    for a song that can easily become a hit
    understandable to everyone
    but with nothing much to give

    Ofcourse it may be acceptable
    If you could disclose your age
    Else I suggest a surgery
    To get poems like this out of your head.......


  • masterblaster gold member
    January 25, 2005
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    Pretty song, pity cant hear the music, I think this is very commercial and if the music is good could go a long way, keep writing there is a need for some good songs, well done, all the best

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