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My Life, part 1

for the first time in my life i saw a girl
whom i thought was more beautiful than a pearl
it was my first day at the college
first hour of absorbing knowledge
first time i entered the class
first thing i saw was that girl through the glass
first time something happened
first time i felt some attraction
the first time i talked to her
i thought i had made some connection
days went by beautiful and strange
i now thought about a date to arrange
i went up and asked her if she was free that night
ill take her on a date even if shes on a dite
no ! was the answer that i recieved
i felt so much grief that i hardly retrieved
wishing i had never seen her in my life
the first sight was an arrow that stabbed like a knife
so the first part ends here of my college years
now begins the story worth of shedding tears
she had cancer and was about to die
that day i saw her and wished good bye
now i came to know about the reason she left me
she know after her death how miserable i'd be
so she said youre the cutest guy ive known
please i beg you... dont cry after my soul's flown
just a request she was saying while crying
im on the death bed... kiss me while im dying
then and there she left me all alone
to this stupid world as i have known
as a place where dreams are shattered to pieces
there i buried her and marked her grave with creases
ten years have passed since she has gone
hard t forget..... i miss her from dusk till dawn.

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Written January 25th, 2005

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