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Move On

I don’t know what to do, I don’t know what to say.
All I know is I’ve never felt for someone this way.
My heart is in your hands and I’m a puppet on a string.
I follow every play that your path chooses to bring.

My heart is on the line, I don’t know what to do.
All I know is that I truly do love you.
I know I cant learn to let these feelings go.
I need you to let me see… find some way just to show.

Show me your heart, let me know what I need to do.
Do I move on or continue loving you?

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Written January 24th, 2005

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  • thephilosopher
    January 24, 2005
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    If a romantic hasn't felt this at one point in his or her life, please raise your hand now (no one raises a hand). You have captured the emotion in this piece quite remarkably. Amazing write, and feelings that are common, but so seldomly put into words in a way which are so easily understood.

    Keep up the good work!

    KP