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Ugly

Free no more,
ugly with hate,
crying alone in the dark,
kids, leave it alone.

You don't understand,
off it goes again,
ugly, so ugly.

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30 second write.  just as my with my other piece, "They call me Auslander", it's the way it should be.  follow the first letters to discover my mood.
Written January 24th, 2005

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  • shadesofnothing
    January 24, 2005
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    Hey there, I totally sense anger in this darling. Are you okay? I hope you aren't mad about something. If you need to talk im here for you. And just remember someone is always going to enter and exit your life, to make it better in some way or another.
    Jenn


  • Leah Rose
    January 24, 2005
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    Hey, is this acrostic or what ever. Fuck you. Nice. Umm, yeah, I liked this 30 second write. You know, I can't write one damn poem like this no matter how hard I try. They never make sense to me. But yeah, yours did for the most part and I just loved it. Kinda mean though, what it says, but whatever. Okay, I'm rambling now. Bye.
    Peace and Love,
    Leah