~Watercolor dreams
Splash upon the horizon
Twilight mist~
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Written September 11th, 2002
Haiku Poem
Courtesy of kandiart at www.deviantart.com
Pic is titled Tropical Dreams
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This is a haiku, since it is about nature. It is not stricktly to the 5-7-5 syllable count, but doesn't have to be.
This is a lovely Haiku.
A Senyru is about human nature. Here is the definition:
A Senyru is a short Japanese poem that is similar to a haiku in structure but treats human beings rather than nature, often in a humorous or satiric way.
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Love the picture. Your words go well with it. You've created tranquility in just a few words. Nicely done.
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Yeah a haiku this time love this its really great
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Nice Senryu, Sis!
Colorful and lovely..makes me want to live on a tropical island!
Love Ya!
<3 Maureen
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This is lovely, Sis. Haiku and senryu are some of my favorite poetry styles and yours is awesome. So much is expressed in these short but impressive poems
Good luck in the contest
love and
Dee
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Beautiful
Oh my sis. short,but so well done. Best of luck in the contest.
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Refreshing
Ah beautiful! I was expecting more lines but it's perfect as it is, leaving the imagery to the imagination. As always there's a spiritual, uplifting feel that can't help but to raise the mood of the reader.
Love & peace
Georgia
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excellent presentation
~Watercolor dreams
Splash upon the horizon
Twilight rainbow mist~
This is great Susan. Your words tell of your colorful dreams, and the affect they have on the mist of twilight. Just beautiful!
Brise molle
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i love this type of poem, just cant seem to do it. keep it up!
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I wish I could do form poetry you do them so well this one is dreamy feeling and well done i enjoyed reading once more on your poetry.
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Beautifuly written
Wow...I've never heard of a Senryu before and this is the first I've seen or read.And I love it very much, so many pictures are streaming in my head. Especially from when you talked about watercolors. Please keep writing these poems, and I hope to read more of them. I also hope you can return the favor and look at some of my own poems. Well bye. -
Susan, this is an awesome Senryu. I have been writing them for a while now and feel comfortable in them finally. You did the form justice with this.
~ John
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don't touch it!
Wonderful write:)
Karen -
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It's amazing how you can say so much in those few words. -
excellent
I get a sense of waterfall & sunset imagery here.
Monet-like lush colors...fuzzy, yet clear at the same time.
Granted, if it was inspired or descriptive of the accompanying picture (which at this time does not show up), forgive me if I'm not visioning correctly.
Regardless, I enjoyed this write. -
don't touch it!
Lovely and I really like the simplicity of the style you are using. You have to make every word count and you do. Hugs -
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I'll third that!! lol - Very pretty indeed!!! ;)
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excellent
Pretty write hun!!! very cute piccie too....~~~GILL~~~~ -
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pretty.
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Thank You so much Pat
Blessings
Susan~~ -
don't touch it!
Love it.....
HUGS
Pat
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