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stuffchanges

The feeling that people change.
IN time people change
The world will change.
All the time please someone help us all.
Why should we care friendship to be good or bad.
The world has to change. People have to change.
I hope for the good.

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Written January 24th, 2005

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  • thejoe
    January 18, 2006
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    hi

  • thejoe
    September 16, 2005
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    hi how are you

  • thejoe
    May 13, 2005
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    I was not going to respond to this. till this part what did I lie about I told you every thing and everything was true so I hope you have nice life to. at less I tried to help you more then I say for lot people in this world


  • darkangelcutter
    March 30, 2005
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    i know you wont respond to this but i just want you to know that i did like you alot and then you was starting to help me but guess what ya gave up why did i c this coming and heres sometime i want you to forget about me i dont want to waste your time..and i am sorry for that....and then thanks for lieing to me too you know what all around i am truely sorry for even talking to you and i do hope that you have a good life and never look back
    signed
    i'm not worth it

  • thejoe
    January 28, 2005
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    thanks for telling me that

  • slowlyhealing
    January 25, 2005
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    good job... everything DOES change... i hope for the good as well...


  • Ava Noire silver member
    January 25, 2005
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    Everything changes, so true. Its hard to adapt to change as well, even when it is for the best it still takes us awhile to get used to it. Keep w riting. Might want to change "felling," to "feeling." In line one.

  • thejoe
    January 25, 2005
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    think you for telling me that talk to you later

  • shootingstars
    January 24, 2005
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    spelling error in line one, spelling error in the title

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