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Trust

Close my eyes and think of you
A tear for every fight and lie.
A scar for every "I hate you"
And every time you made me cry.

Every fucking memory
is rendered now so bittersweet.
Why couldn't you just trust in me?
I'm still haunted by your heartbeat.

You said that you'd forgiven me.
For what?  I did nothing wrong.
That's the part that you forgot
In your angry poems and saddest songs.

Your furious accusations
destroyed my loving trust.
You killed me that night, those days.
I won't die by your hand again.

Author notes

every feel like you've been verbally slapped in the face?  yeah, me too.
Written January 24th, 2005

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  • Cleopatra
    February 7, 2005
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    Really nice write, definitely something I can relate 2


  • sleepingbeauty13
    February 1, 2005
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    great

    I like your poem. Its very true. I've beeen through stuff like this. Keep the good work up


  • P0TE is Dead
    January 24, 2005
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    i love you so much