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The flying pig

Even with all the people lying,
The children crying
The starving dying
Even when the truth's denying,
That crazy pig will keep on flying

The poor old pig dunno where he should be
He cant sit on land and he cant float on sea

So he keeps on flying way up in the air,
just to prove the magic's still there

The poor old pig dunno where he should be,
He cant sit on land and he cant float on sea,
The poor old pig all he wants is to be free,
And did I mention that pig is me?



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Written January 24th, 2005

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  • penman gold member
    June 27, 2007
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    Wonderful

    Nice and clever write. Really enjoyed it.

  • Tangle
    February 4, 2005
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    I like it, it was slightly mad, and quite deep at the same time, nice combination (nothing wrong with a little insanity in my mind)

    Good write, i enjoyed


  • crying-blood
    January 25, 2005
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    wow hunni! this is really cool. nice rhyming, and nice message. really origional. keep up the good work
    -mina-


  • January 24, 2005
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    Cool dude, my fav of urs so far. Might nick it and write a song. Nah jks.


  • x dark fairie x
    January 24, 2005
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    why does this remind me of mike? (not coz hes a pig!) lol original, nice rhyme but TOTALLY INSANE and v. unlike your others! -x-x-x-

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