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Expression

all across the page
telling the world a picture
lines in black and white

Author notes

another randomly inpired piece
Written January 24th, 2005

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  • Ealdwyne
    January 27, 2005
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    well done man. as Ive said so many times, I cannot write a haiku but I love reading them. I like this, as usual such description in so few lines always captivates me. simplicity in the complex, complexity in the simple. RW

  • Three
    January 24, 2005
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    Difficult to comment on a Haiku :-) But you´re right. Lines on paper but so much more...