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Second Chances

t is so hard to watch others suffer
It’s like watching two cars collide
You watch in amazement and horror
Wishing some help you could provide

I’ve seen near tragedy occur on this web site
Witnessed lives being torn all apart
I’ve also been able to watch as
Two lives came back and gave a fresh start

To those who have overcome tribulations
I raise my glass in a celebratory toast
Second chances are something not many receive
So of this I pray you make the most.

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Written January 24th, 2005

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  • galfalfa gold member
    January 29, 2005
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    I'll drink to that! Now where's the food
    An excellent write which conveys a very worthwhile message - second chances are not always easily given so they should really make the most of the first Well done Harland - enjoyed this!