I arch my back and cry out
As I feel your mouth between my thighs
The hot moisture weakening my grasp
On my own reality as you continue
To let ecstasy pour over me
When it's finally my turn
I take you in my mouth and carress you
I feel your muscles tighten and hear
Your groan as you run your fingers
Through my hair and release
Author notes
Written January 24th, 2005
In a list
A contest entry
- Change My Mood by SnowThief.
450 points, ended February 13, 2005, 7 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
Comments
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Ahhh, I love this one aswell. Oral is a great fetish.
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i love it... made me feel.... *sighs* hot...
what a great poem 
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Well I would congratulate you on the bronze... but I think that this deserved a better reward! It was so arousing... the only thing that I think this could use is a little more length... just seemed like it ended too soon. Other than that, fantastic.
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Haha, thanks.
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They're not all like this, actually. My erotica's usually much longer. You're just looking at the old ones.
I'm glad you like them though. 
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Thank you.
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"I arch my back and cry out
As I feel your mouth between my thighs
The hot moisture weakening my grasp"
Hot stuff. That's always a weird sensation...but always welcomed here. lol. Gives me the shivers thinking back on it
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I really like this poem. The wording, the flow, the feeling, the everything is so perfect. I like how it goes from one person to the other too. Both having pleasure is very good. *more loves*
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well, I've never entered a contest like this before. And after reading this i know now what is being looked for. aside from that. This poem has great flow and rhythm to it. good work!
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