Here am I sitting here trying to write a song
But everything that I write down always turns out wrong
Where are you, in the clouds escaping from my grasp?
I try to run, I try to hide, but I am just not fast
Enough to run away to be free from pain
And the pouring rain
And all the things I say
Everything I've said and the places I've been
And the things I've seen
Have all gone straight to my head
When can we disappear off into the sunset?
With no cares and no woes
And nothing to regret
Where was I when you were gone from my past?
And where were you when I was there
Trying to be fast
Enough to run away to be free from pain
And the pouring rain
And all the things I say
Everything I've said and the places I've been
And the things I've seen
Have all gone straight to my head
There was I sitting there trying to write a song
It went quite well
I think it'll sell
Or maybe I'm just wrong
Author notes
This is the first song I ever wrote. The dictionary definition of the title is - to not allow to be forgotten.
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^_~ Another brilliant song/write!! Good job and keep up the great work~!!
~erika -
The rhyme seemed force and I didnt think you were consistent but going on to other topics.
Maybe it will sound better when you sing it. -
This is a wonderful set of lyrics hun. If I could carry a tune I'd probably sing it but I can't... at the moment that is, unless I know how it goes
Wonderful song hun
Petal
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very good. I liked the flow of it. Thanksd for entering and good luck in my contest
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Good lyrical flow. The refrain is good. But way too long to ever make it on pop radio, he-he. Nice work
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