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Just say it

tell me you don't like me
don't make me go through the pain
say I hate you
and maybe things will be sane!
Say it! Don't fucking deny it!
You don't even know why your my friend!
I am a bitchy insecure, cunt
ADMIT IT
You hate me
don't lie to my face
don't make me believe you one more fucking day
Just say it!

Author notes

Just fucking come out and say it... I am tired of the lies.. I am tired of everything. I am not a good person... I am fucked in the head... Just fucking say it
Written January 23rd, 2005

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  • blue128eyedkk
    January 27, 2005
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    Great Job! I loved it, and to be honest i could possiblely use this poem toward somebody, but i wont dont worry. Great write! Keep up the good work.

    TTYl
    XxxAngel44xxX


  • Dutch Doll
    January 23, 2005
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    wow... you get one's adrenaline pumping with this read. It got to the point of me picturing me saying this to someone I despise, wow. Great angry read

  • Scarred Tears
    January 23, 2005
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    that poem is AWESOME no lies!


  • Kindredblood
    January 23, 2005
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    Awesome

    Awesome deep and intense write, pity people need to lie to get anywhere, whats wrong with being straight up, get the message in your words as plain as day, harsh but realistic, hopefully others get the point, cool write.