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Call it meat and defeat

I thought you were there
but I looked into a blank stare
I thought you were with me
I see un to me
that you couldnt be
Now I see
that we wasnt ment to be
you were eatten
now I have been beaten
The masters of my life
cuz you have a beutiful wife
It was like a stabing knife
I don't know
why my heart should slow
my heart skiped a beat
and you were eatting meat
now I have this sence of defeat
that cant be beat

Author notes

Written my lil sis and her friend
Written January 23rd, 2005

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