Curtains twitch as I walk by
So many thoughts unknown
I look to the sun so bright in the sky
Oh, how time has flown
Kicking a stone along the pavements
Is my only pleasure
My head is riddled with cruel statements
None of them I will treasure
Further away my mind drifted
Just like the clouds in the sky
I think on times when my heart lifted
I never quite knew why
While I am thinking
Of a suitable end to this poem
Continually my mind is sinking
Deeper into that place unknown
Author notes
I wrote this around the time of late 1997/early 1998. I was a lonely 15 year old.
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15 eh... So was I .... even with all the people I was around and friends with I was lonely because I couldn't really talk to any of them. The worst way to be lonely, being in a crowded room and still feeling alone... Wonderful poem hunny
Petal
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that was a really awesu write. Love it!!!
Keep up the good work - C
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Wow, that's an awesome poem. I liked your use of rhyme. Nice imagery too. Great write.
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great poem, very deep...awesome write, byez!
~Karinn -random person-
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