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I need my answers, wise..

Wherein lies my madness?
Wherein lies my wit?
Where from comes my sadness?
Myself! You lying twit!

Knowing I am outside
Begging to come in
Where in my mind I hide
I force myself to sin

Never I regretted before
Honestly I could
Off to where did my sanity soar?
Off to where I would

Author notes

I was just writing whatever, and this just came out.... hope it makes more sense to you than it does to me
Written January 23rd, 2005

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  • JoFoxserian
    December 14, 2005
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    D*MN!

    OWCH!

    that was FULL LOADED!

    very strong and powerful!

    i loved it!


  • -Lonely-Prisoner-
    January 23, 2005
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    "Wherein lies my madness?
    Wherein lies my wit?
    Where from comes my sadness?
    Myself! You lying twit!"

    lol makes no sense to me but i like it, lol, well done, be safe