I thought love was blind, then I saw you
I thought love had abandoned me
But it brought you into my life
All my dreams take me back to you
I never knew, but it was what my heart wanted to do
Deep down I know we're through
But still my dreams take me back to you
When you left me, my heart, it broke in two
I didn't know how I would get through
I don't know what I'm supposed to do
All my dreams take me back to you
I never knew, but it was what my heart wanted to do
Deep down I know we're through
But still my dreams take me back to you
[mini instumental]
You had to leave
Take away
All I believed in
How can I go on when you aren't here in my life?
[main instrumental]
But still my dreams take me back to you
All my dreams take me back to you
Author notes
Wrote this in January of 2001 with a good friend of mine. I just sat with my my guitar, playing the same chords over and over again. I showed her what lyrics I already had and she helped me finish them.
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- Lost Love by hurtz w-o a cause.
300 points, ended July 30, 2004, 15 entries
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All my dreams take me back to you
I never knew, but it was what my heart wanted to do
Deep down I know we're through
But still my dreams take me back to you
Wow, that was writen so powerful! i loved that verse or whatever you wanna call it the best! it amazed me! anyways, keep up the great work!
GREAT job!
~tiff
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This turned out wonderfully. I like this, wish I had a recording of it
Wonderful job hunny
Petal
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excellent
wonderful lyrics. i loved the repetition. great job! -
don't touch it!
great write
keep up the kick arseline writing! (idk?)
peace, love, pixie stix
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Bravo, well done...... great writing... Karen
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great write
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i like this poem alot, it reminds me of how i felt with one of my ex boyfriends and how i knew it was over but i couldn't stop thinking of him. luvie, Ginger
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