Love lost is never wasted
you brought joy into my life.
sweetest lips I've ever tasted
gone are hopes of being your wife.
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Written January 22nd, 2005
In a list
A contest entry
- Simple, SHORT and Sweet... by -a7x-.
300 points, ended January 23, 2005, 19 entries
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Perhaps,but then the love is lost and that which is lost can never be a waste if the feeling of loss is attributed to it.
Love is a feeling which encompasses the horrid to the torrid...you expressed the same so well out here..kudos..Shubs -
A very expressive write..I found you to be great with images drafted upon paper..Well done.
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This was a really wonderful poem Jenn.
Love Mia
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very nice poem Jen..beautiful but very sad..good job
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Sad but beautiful
A love coming into our lives always leave soem thing behind. Joy and happiness first and pain and scars latter.
May be the joy is worth the pain and the scars, or most will not long for love so much.
Once again a lovely poem, kind of bitter sweet.
Love from india - Joel - -
excellent write
What a beautiful picture! Short poem and sad... but it catch some attention! -
First off, I REALLy liked your title.
Now, on to the poem... AWWWWWWW that's so sweet yet so sad!!! I liked it a lot though. especially how it actually rhymes lol. Anywho, great poem and good luck!
-CoLe
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