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In An REO Speedwagon Shirt With Feathered Hair

I couldn't help but
Want to kick your
Fucking ass from
The day I met -
- You...
Very little has changed.

Other than buckets of empathy
For your beer gut, and bald spot.

And I hope God strikes me dead -
- For saying it,
But anything's better
Than replaying it.

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Written January 22nd, 2005

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  • February 17, 2005
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    That's "A" not "An" and what gives when you tell me I otta join this wagon cus its cool, and after I do I see you haven't even logged in since 2/2. Anyway cool homepage.


  • Naughtygrlred
    January 24, 2005
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    wierd i was just listening to reospeed wagon, followed by some journey, eh don't forget the forienger!

  • SaralaAnne
    January 23, 2005
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    This was a good poem...But I agree wiht parksleyninja...Leave the seventys alone...I may have been born in the eightys but I swear I was raised in the seventys...Gee...Thanks Mom...Good job...

  • parksleyninja
    January 22, 2005
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    I don't like the REO speedwagon reference comon people be nice (i love classic rock and feathered hair and well...i'm stuck in the 70's so ya know) but i love the rhythm of this.