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I Am Tired

I am tired.
Tired of living this life.
Hoping for a brighter day.
But the nights are all I know.
Those nights when I cry
Myself to sleep
Wondering,
Praying,
For someone,
Just anyone
To understand
My screams.
I don’t need sympathy.
I don’t need hugs.
All I wish
Is that I had someone.
A friend so close
That they knew me so well
That they could relate.
But none of that has happened.
I don’t think it ever will.
A thunderous silence
Diffuses through my mind.
My thoughts.
My ideas.
My lifelong dreams.
All knotted in my brain.
I am confused and devastated.
So for now,
I am left weary.
A lonesome soul.
I am tired.

Author notes

I wrote this a while back.. One of my earlier ones I think.. Hm.. Let me know how you feel about it.
Written January 22nd, 2005

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  • mushroomheadx01
    January 22, 2005
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    way to go!

    that was really deep, way to go


  • VballChick074
    January 22, 2005
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    Wow...that was amazing. I feel like you took everything I've been wanting to say for so long. I can totally relate "Praying,
    For someone,
    Just anyone
    To understand
    My screams." That is all I want too...Awesome write.


  • JackhammerLullaby
    January 22, 2005
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    life is good....take it dangerously