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cartouche

misread,
wrapped in cashmir,
draped in silken stoles
pulled apart by
misinterpretations
and perceptions,
otherwise
explained away...

rights and privledges
hidden in a crush of
doctrines, lost and
found, like a camera
film, snap captures light
and lies of equality
lined up and ready.
misread.

cartouche.

Author notes

workin on the grammar, any crit is as always more than welcome.
Written January 22nd, 2005

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  • procrastinater
    January 24, 2005
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    I like this, I'm a bit confused, but I love the images the thoughts and the metaphors, I guess I just really like it, incredibly well written.

    it's a bit ironic I was on the internet to google some essays for your dads philosophy class which I'm taking and really enjoying, and I decided to check to see if you had anything new, actually no that's not ironic nevermind.
    Edited on Jan 24, 7:01 p.m. because ''.